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I think I just had a heart attack. Of happiness. Because holy shit, talk about fastest update ever. And then my heart slowly crumbled, halfway through it was completely crushed but it slowly started to rebuild towards the end. I lmaoed when someone yelled if she was going to fuck her and Carrie yelled back. She just doesn't seem like the type to snap like that, especially since she's the girl who's afraid to break a plate, but I love the fact that she did. And Kelly's mom, I don't think I've ever wanted to slap someone upside the head as much as I wanna slap her. That whole scene was pretty heart tugging. I mean how much more selfish could her mom get? I found it sad that Kelly was searching for answers to other's bigotry in the bible. Then I had the usual rounds of 'holy shit, that's so freaking cute!' and it's usually the little things that get me the most. It was nice to get a moment like that between Carrie and Ashley. I'mma stop here 'cause this review is getting way longer than originally anticipated. But yeah, thanks for putting us out of our misery hella quick, lol.

Aw, Ashley's answers made me smile. But damn, I can't stand the way Jeanne is here. She's so mean to her own daughter, but I could totally see that reaction a mother has happening for real, so it's even worse. The part about the mob of people protesting against Carrie and Kelly was pretty realistic and nearly broke my heart, I've seen things like that on the news and all and it's so laughable. I mean, I'm like, they're protesting against other human beings, how much more wrong can you get? Anyway, all of that stuff aside, I really like this story, which is amazing, because I usually get bored after like 20 chapters or something, but I just keep on reading here. (so it's a compliment, lol)

I loved that you incorporated Kelly's faith into the story. I was glad to see her stand up for herself to her mom. Carrie was so amazing and I'm glad that Ashley was supportive and honest. Great update! :)

Oh you are evil, pure evil. Leaving it on a cliffhanger like THAT. When I read that there were protesters I was like wha? and then when I read that Kelly's mom was among them even I felt the burn. There's something oddly sweet about Carrie wanting to make Kelly feel good so she wouldn't be sad, but ya know it was kinda inevitable, lol. I awwwed when Kelly saw her mom and the only thing Carrie could tell her was that she loved her. If it was me out there, I'd be more angry than anything else. And then the part where Ashley finds then all tangled on the couch was another major aww moment. I'm so excited to see what the next update holds.

Loved that Kelly went out with shoes that didn't match, and for some reason I found Carrie's description/gesture of the guard named Chuck funny. The little moment between Ashley and Kelly was funny (the sympathy line). I don't know how Kelly's mom is going to react, but I like that this update was focused on Kelly and Carrie (and the people supporting them). I think it made Jeanne showing up in Kelly's dressing room that much more shocking because we didn't get to see where she's at mentally. :) Thank you

OKKK FIRST OF ALL I HATEEE YOU!!...haha no im just KIDDING..but honestly why would you do that to me/>?? leaving the end of the chapter at Kelly seeing her mom in the dressing room...SERIOUSLY?? SERIOOUUUSSLLYY??? UGHHHH...i loved the update and how long it was...they keep getting cuter by the second...how Carrie is still asleep but she protectivly tightens her grip on Kelly!!--> SOOOO CUTE!!...ok well thats enough of my ranting for now!!! you better update this story soon missy...or i might just have to...well...you know...do nothing...butt i cant think mean mean mean things hahaha!!! awsome job girl!!!

Cool update :) Kelly was definitely a dork with framing the tabloid pics lol I didn't doubt that Reba would take the news about Kelly's mom well, but it was still nice to see her getting to be there for Kelly. Thanks for the update.

Whenever I see this updated I do a happy dance in my seat. I thought it was impossible for Kelly to get anymore adorable. That bit with her wanting to frame the picture almost killed me with cuteness. Ashley was hilarious. Then when Kelly actually did frame it and asked Ashley to get her another for the texas house, it made me do the giggle thing. Any scene with Kelly and Carrie breathing the same air is a favorite. I loved the recap of like the last 35 chapters but in Kelly speaking format, lol. I love the fact that Reba has kinda taken the role of a motherly presence in Kelly's life. The one thing I completely adore about this story no matter what is how developed and advanced Carrie and Kelly's relationship is. They're way past the point of ever going back, it makes me all warm inside. And I'm gonna stop here 'cause if I pointed out every thing I liked I'd be here for awhile.

ok i have already said it once, but i am going to say it again...I LOVEEEEE THIS STORY. My favorite by far...u would be surprised how many times i have read and re read this story! this chapter was amazing, really touched me. It seems like they are finally getting their lives as a official outed couple on track!! they are so absolutly cute together its amazing. Great job with the update.i loveedd it!!

Lol, the part with Reba's talk was funny, the way Carrie acted like a teenager with the whole 'just sleeping'. It's pretty amazing how you manage to write so much in so little time, I mean, I was gone for a few days and there's like twelve updates or something. I laughed at the Kezbo part too, by the way, I could totally see Kelly's fans acting like that. Can't wait to read more.