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for Playing With Fire

by classic06

schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I laughed when Kelly soothed Carrie by saying that she was sure Carrie would have beaten the dude to a pulp. I loved how Kelly also reassured Kelly about the pane not crashing, like she couldn't promise that, but it was so cute that it worked. I like the idea of them having a place that they decorate together, I don't know why, but I do. I think the guys earned their security t-shirts, lol. Loved the update, thanks for posting such a long one.
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two story updates in one day? "Score!" So, your other story had me swooning over Kelly, and this one is Carrie's. Way to keep them balanced. Ha. I love the protectiveness of both girls. That scene with Kelly just staring at Reba during rehearsals sounds so her. Awesomeness. BTW, "Me Kelly. Me make fire"...lol. can't wait to read more. :)
person Violence
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so unbelievably adorable. Carrie attempted to beat the shit out of a guy that was probably twice her size and Kelly wanted to punch out the flight attendant. They're quite the protective [violent] duo. But I think it shows dedication that they're both willing to beat someone up for the other, kinda cute too. Lmao, those girls are always getting interupted, hopefully they can finish one day. I had some major awww moments all throughout this chapter. Seriously, like the last part of the update all I did was go aww and get a big smile on my face. I love moments like that. But I do have to say, who the hell hates someone so much they take the time to find and key a damn car?
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Every time i read this story i love it more and more! Please make it go on forever!! haha!! they are so proitective of one another its soo adorable!! i cannot wait to see what happens on tour!!!!!
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what happens in Nashville. And btw, kudos to you...60 chapters in and this story feels very much like it could last forever. Great job! :)
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha. Kelly naming all her cars made me laugh.

Nice update.
person Violence
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're welcome. :) As long as you never leave this story on a cliffhanger for like a month 'cause that would be unbearable as well as heinous. Don't know how you could think this story could be becoming too long or not holding interest. I'm still reading with rapt attention. But yeah, I get the whole busy thing and don't worry about it, it's completely understandable. Any update is a good update.

Damn, hope they don't get mauled by the paps. I loved that whole 4 paragraph description from Jason's view. It was quite beautiful. I have a feeling something is going to happen with Kelly's mom soon. And I love that her band is supporting her. Although I'm feeling anxious about what the next chapter might hold.
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww the chapter was short but i loved it. It really makes my day when I see this story being updated1!! and dont be silly this story never gets boring...the longer it is the better!!! i lovvvvveee it!!! continue the great writing!!
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is probably my fav story, so it can't be "too long" :) I don't know if it's because the story is longer or what, but I love the characters and the way they've developed, like with Kelly and her cars in this chapter. Plus there was a tiny bit at the end, when the band is being cool and going on about how they need bodyguard gear, and Carrie is being logical and they tease her for it. Like the one time she's thinking something through (that's not about Kelly/her family or her career) and she still gets joked on for not getting it. Awesome update, I really liked all the parts.

p.s. I'm sorry to hear your internet and cable isn't hooked up in your new place, I hope you have games or a stereo or something to entertain you.
person greens28
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed lately-but I have lots of issues w/ this site, or my computer lately. My screen freezes up a lot when I am trying to read or review a story here. Sorry about that. Anyway, back to what is imprtant-the FIC. That was a very lovely update & I am glad that Kelly's band is supporting her. The part about her bandmates playing Guitar Hero was very funny & original. It was very romantic how the girls were watching the stars & Carrie was trying to make Kelly feel better. Great job!!

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