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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think with some POV policing, passive voice minimizing and a little edit TLC, this could read quite well. Very creative and imaginative.
KD
KD
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you plan to continue with this story I can't wait to see how todd gets back at him.
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gosh I'm such a dinkus. *facepalm* I accidentally typed in Mousey instead of Moony!!! DX
Original (now edited) review: This is such a great little slashy fic! I absolutely love it hardcore! Thanks so much for writing it for me, Moony!! *loves*
Btw, I can't wait for the return of The Coat and the Judge's revenge... *shifty*
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So sorry! *waits for sequel*
Original (now edited) review: This is such a great little slashy fic! I absolutely love it hardcore! Thanks so much for writing it for me, Moony!! *loves*
Btw, I can't wait for the return of The Coat and the Judge's revenge... *shifty*
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So sorry! *waits for sequel*