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for More than a feeling

by Alaine

person TheQuietOne
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic thus far! I like where it's going, I know I'm probably like a yearr late, but, I still loove it! :D I like how you made Missy have actual feelings as opposed to just making her cheat and being like, poof gone, vam sex ensues. (Though I still loooove that.. xD) Can't wait to read more!
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's good, the only thing I found a little unbelievable was how Ville kept calling Bam "sweetheart" or "bammie". That just seemed weird and awkward... I imagine them having a more... I dunno.... abusive relationship, so to speak. If they had pet names for each other, I don't think they'd be so sweet. Good writing though, I like the story so far.
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good for you first fic. Can't wait to read more.

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