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i hadn't even realized that i was holding my breathe while reading this chapter...it was an excellent chapter for both kelly and carrie. they're both moving forward and kelly is being honest. LOVELY!!

...what a way to end the year...and start the new one. HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE!!

Michael sucks for kissing Carrie. I don't even want to know why she still went out with him/had a business meeting. I hope Kelly and Carrie talk when they wake up/get up. This was probably the most detailed sexual scene you have written between the two of them, and it was written well, but I don't know, it was just like really apparent that they needed to talk. It kinda was that they said like one thing to each other, but more because they were sleeping together, if that makes sense. I'm so wondering what is going to happen next. :)

Oh. DAMN. rawr. That's amazing. And I'm totally taking them having sex as a good thing. 'Cause wow. That was ravishing to the extreme. I just hope one of them dosen't run or regret come morning time. It'd make me sad. And regarding the last chapter, thank you Luke for finally seeing reason.

It's a good thing that Kelly got through to Luke. I forget whether or not his parents are in the picture or not, but it's sad that Kelly's the only one really trying with him.

that was such a sweet and perfect chapter. im glad kelly and luke finally have some kind of closure and an understanding with each other. i almost dont even mind that carrie wasn't mentioned...almost. (lol jk) you rock!

I REALLY wanted to smack Carrie in the back of the head with something for that past couple of chapters. But I do understand what and why she's doing what she's doing. She and Kelly have no soild, defined relationship status and it's hurting them both badly. So Carrie subconsciously figures that maybe if she goes on a date with Michael it will spring Kelly into action. So far it's backfired and Luke isn't helping any. I really really really wanna know how that talk with Luke goes and what happens to Carrie on her date. Hopefully she'll flee the scene half way through.

where is she taking him? and i don't like seeing her being all stand-off-ish to carrie. :(

Let's hope that Kelly is better at talking with the kid than she has been with others. Carrie is a moron.

I loved that Kelly was so open, but at the same time she was doing her best to protect herself; Carrie just didn't see that. I can kinda see how maybe Carrie wasn't trying to push, and then she did push when she realized that Kelly wasn't happy with her saying she was going to cancel the date, it was just too little too late. I imagine things would have gone differently if she had already canceled with the guy and had shown up to tell Kelly how she was feeling, but she didn't. Again, I kinda see why she wouldn't have done those things, because it would have been like she was putting it all on Kelly, but Carrie kinda shot herself in the foot by not telling Kelly how she felt. Her saying that Kelly is a good reason to not go is true, but that didn't have anything to do with how much Kelly means to her, which is probably what Kelly wanted, certainly needed, to hear. I totally get why Kelly walked off. Great update.