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by classic06

person Mo56
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohh the plot thickens!!
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Carrie screwed up big. Someone needs to let her know that you can turn someone down even if you aren't in a relationship. Idiot. She needs to make it up to Kelly stat. The girl was already upset about Luke, and now this, seriously. Carrie even looked over at Kelly. All of which sucks because Kelly was jealous when dude first asked. Kelly might be having issues with everything, but just because they haven't labeled themselves doesn't mean that they don't have something. Carrie should do something big, like... she could go to the studio and call dude (sorry can't remember his name at the moment) right in front of Kelly to say that she is with someone. She doesn't even have to give him a name, but it would help Kelly get back a little trust.
person Mo56
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay i'm not really diggin' the whole "carrie dating" thing...but i know you'll make something amazing out of it...right?
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really surprised Luke was in such a bad mood. As mean as he was, he has a point, but it sucks that he was so cold to Kelly. It's strange in a way because Kelly hurts yes, but she can't understand it exactly. At least Carrie will be there for her, as much as they can be anyway, at the meeting. I hope that Kelly doesn't run off now. She was expecting things from Carrie, in the parking lot, though I guess that might be different now after the visit with Luke.
person Mo56
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ouch. that hurt
person Violence
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As soon as I read those lyrics i knew there was gonna be some kind of lovin' going on. Okay, so you teased instead of pleased but still, it was nice. rawr. Props to Carrie for being able to stop herself. I surely wouldn't have been able to. ooooo, I liked that little reapperence of the flashes into the furture but I do not understand it for shit. It leaves me with so many questions. Where the hell is the woman going? Is it Kelly or Carrie? What happens to there not!relationship? Interesting.
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think it's cool that they stopped. They already know they get along sexually, so it was great to see them talk (even though that wasn't shown lol, you know what I mean). And there was another little part to the present, that was cool :) I'm wondering if it was just the emotional connection that she was glad that they stopped, or what. Neat ass ending :) And, of course, it was good to see them interacting.
person Junkyxl
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, the beginning was so cute, with Kelly falling and all. I could totally hear her saying that in my head. I like how comfortable they feel around each other, as if whatever they have now isn't discussion-worthy. They're too cute, like sugary sweet, my heart's all melting, so I'm gonna eat some salt to even things out.
person Mo56
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
was this chapter suppose to make us feel all warm and mushy and giddy on the inside? cause if so, IT DID!!! love it!
person sugar
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D

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