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wow, that was intense. i can only image what the rest of the story will be like...luckily i won't have to for long!...right? lol

I know I haven't said much about the last updates, but I seriously can't think of anything good enough to say about them. It's been very emotional, and stuff like that is very hard for me to express, but I think that the whole situation with Alex has been extremely well done. I was thinking earlier about how Alex and Kelly and Carrie's sitch in this chapter were a parallel of one another, but of course I've forgotten it after working on stuff for school. Greatly awesome updates :) (though I know that doesn't make up for not commenting on each individual chapter)

awwwwwww :'(i acually had tears in my eyes:(..this is so sad:(:( great update though

*wping tears* You know, I saw the word "funeral" and thought, "Hmm, odd choice...hope it's not about omen about their talk." No, it was worse! I mean, I knew it was a matter of time, but dang, it sure felt like a punch to the stomach! I almost wanted to tell you that I hoped YOU were lying. That was seriously, seriously sad. I really wasn't expecting it already, probably 'cause I didn't want Alex to die. So yeah, I reeeeeeeeelly hope you update, like, soon 'cause I'll sure be checking for it. In the meantime, I'll go back to my ClarkWood world where everything is happy (at least for now). All I can say is, awesome, awesome job...even if you made me cry!

...i don't even know what to say other then, i can only imagine that the next update will be filled with more tears and sadness. you're good

OMG That is so sad!!! So good but why did she have to die! Great update! Update soon!

man, i seriously want nothing more then to know what happens next...please continue as soon as you can! this story is so amazing.

AW! Well, two updates back-to-back! It sucks you're sick, but thanks for writing! I loved the interaction with Carrie and Kelly at Carrie's house. It's so adorable that Carrie obviously wants to be with Kelly, but doesn't want to take advantage of her. I don't think it would be easy turning down Kelly...at all. lol I can't see where that leads... As far as Alex, it's so sad, but I'm glad she's got the girls there for her. I've enjoyed that you've kept both parts of the story progressing at the same time. I feared it would get all really sad for a long time. There is sadness, but then you add the cute little moments between the girls and they kinda cheer me up. This is seriously an incredible story. Hope you feel better soon! :)

Awe the update is so sad but so good at the same time! Can't wait for more!

...they are soooo a couple! hello?! lol i love these two