rate_review Reviews

Once again i'm blown away!!! HOT HOT HOT!!!! Thats really all I can say. Every chapter is way better than the last.... You know exactly what to write to keep me coming back for more. I Love it!!! Great Job!!!

I giggled when Carrie asked Jason if he chased butterflies too, that was a nice touch. I also like that she didn't lie to Alex or try to speak around saying how much money there was- I'm sure that's weird, but it was nice to see Carrie treating Alex like an adult in a way. We're always talking about how it's cool to see Kelly opening up to Carrie, but you're good at it, and it was really clear in the last two chapters without it being stated. Between her understanding what Carrie had meant in the previous chapter, and how she was just doing what she wanted in this chapter, it was nicely and subtlety shown.

Awesome update! I can't wait to read more!!

Well, that was everything all rolled into one. I loved the cute interactions between Carrie and Alex. She is the cutest (imaginary) kid ever! (I actually thought about your story when I was watching the Stand Up To Cancer thing on TV and they had the kids with cancer...Yeah, I guess I'm that obsessed. lol). Anyway. Loved this update! It was amazing...and Carrie/Kelly in the pool?! WOW! Hotness...you really have an awesome way with words. :)

convenient for the second part of the double update to fall in chapter 69 there, classic... haha ;-) so yeah...def one of the hotter moments between these two. cold showers anyone? lol. seriously though, you can just plain WRITE, girl! =) keep it up.

You just love making dirty things occur in these 69 chapters, huh? Haha, for the first time I recognized both sets of lyrics right off the bat. Yes, I am that awesome. Can't wait to see Kelly's reacton to the bracelet. I LOVED the pool sex part. I think my brain when into a happy comatose for awhile there. 'Cause, ya know, they're always a joy to read. There's not much else to say besides 'whoa' and 'wow, do it again.'

i love this story. i could read it for days! please keep up the fantastic work! kelly/carrie rock!

This has got to be one of my favorite chapters of this story!! it was hot, cute, catching, and so much more!!!! i honestly cant get anough of your writing!!!you could write about mickey mouse and i would still be extremly captivated!!! great job!!!

Mmmm, so close. Poor Kelly though. Carrie's such a tease! And she's only making Kelly's sexual frustration worse and at this rate it ain't gonna be subdued anytime soon, lol. I've done that before with a grill, burned something that is. My arm smelled like burnt hair for a week. Oh my god, momma Carrie came out to play. Ya know I had to google sarong 'cause I had no idea what the hell it was. But really, that last part was pretty hot.

That was the best update.... I loved it :) Your awesome!!!