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Thank you for the update. This is was soooooo good! Like, seriously. I loved this update. I like that Carrie's been there for Kelly and is getting her to open up. I love that Carrie's been honest about her feelings. Even if she's being a horndog. I really can't blame her. (either of them, really) lol. The pool escapades were hot and sexy. I SOOO wanna go swimming with Clarkwood! lol. More soon, I hope. :)

Wow! Loved the updates!! They were amazing!! I also love your other story Best Days of Our Lives! But great updates! I can't wait to findout what happens next!!

Come on now. You're killing me. With both cuteness and sadness. That's almost like being shot in the stomach and pushed into a river with cement shoes. I keep forgeting that Alex is eventually going to die and every time I'm reminded it's like, ouch. And whatever's going on with Carrie can't possibly be good for her in the long run. When Alex dies it's already going to rip Kelly apart but if Carrie, her major support beam, gets hospitalized or something, that's really gonna kill Kelly. ...it's just a thought, not an idea that should be used. Yay, go Alex for finally telling Kelly she can have more than one best friend. Hehe, Sacajawea. Funny name.

In the previous update, I really liked that Alex still remembered about wanting to get Kelly a gift. Little kids, and no offense meant if anyone has any kids, but sometimes they are flighty. It just reminded me of how much Alex has been through that she considered buying a gift and remembering it so important because of the bond between her and Kelly. So, it was a good thing that Carrie talked to Kelly when they were in bed, to help Kelly along with her emotions- that's all too sad for me to get into right now, but I'm glad that Carrie is there for Kelly. I can't remember, but does Carrie even know that she's sick? Okay that sounded weird, but I think you know what I meant. Cool updates, thank you for them.

I kinda laughed when Carrie asked Kelly if she wanted to have the talk first, it sounded like 'the talk', you know. Alex is still being cute and Carrie's still being stubborn with the sickness and all. I'm seriously wondering what's up with her now, 'cause it seems super serious. And I laughed at the end comment too, because really, Alex is more the adult than Kelly is sometimes haha. I can't wait for more..

Aww...Alex is soooooo adorable. Its really gonna make me sad later on down the line. You write so that we kind of have a connection with the characters. I like that. I really hope there is nothing serious going on with Carrie. More soon plz!!!

~Crow~

lmao. Well, I can't blame you for being distracted by them. "I heard Princess Diaries was your favorite movie, so I just figured..." Is that Carrie's subtle way of telling Jason he's gay? lol. Shiny... I love that word. My first thought when Alex talked about her mom breaking her engagement ring with a hammer was 'That's something you'd see in KC video.' No way, Carrie's gonna buy it but she's also gonna make Alex think she paid for it all on her own? How. Effin. Sweet. I can't wait to see Kelly's reaction to that one.

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so first off...Americans are already back in school??? well I guess you must finish earlier than us Canadians?? haha totally pointless!!! anwyays i think this one was awsome especially when Carrie is telling alex that she will have enough money to buy the gift for kelly!! honestly its a tear jerker!!! So i loveeedd that part!!!! great job!!

I really don't have much to say except for awwwwwww. The whole thing was insanely cute. From the shoes to Jason making horse noises to the ice cream. And the ending had that wonderful bout of sexual tension. I'm so glad the Doc is like a mute right now. You sure she doesn't secretly have duck tape over her mouth?

Loved Jason and the doctor standing around not knowing what to do, and Carrie wandering off and finding herself so many shoes in such a short time. I'm curious about what Alex is going to give Kelly- I'm sure it'll make her bawl. lol That's good laughter by the way. I'm not surprised that Clive was calling about Kelly ending her 'vacation' early, though I did love that it was the cause of how Carrie and the others realized where Kelly was (her cursing). School started on the 18th for me, and I'm happy about half of my classes, so I get about being glad that school is back, sorta :) The updates haven't sucked, so go ahead and be cocky.