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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOWWW!!! that was sooo intense!!! the writing was amazing!! i think they both really needed that ehh?! o and obviously your writing is not only about sex!!! hahaha ur funny!!
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol I don't think two chapters out of fifty seven makes anyone think the story is becoming too sexual. You've spent a long time, in both stories, developing Kelly and Carrie's feelings. I missed the go kart update, but it was cute. And this last update, yeah they had sex, but Kelly really wasn't going to let Carrie support her in any other way, and that was the point, no? They have feelings for each other, which was shown very well, so don't think that the story is getting lost with the sex.
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy mother of fuck... *thud*
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha. Spoiled, that's a good one. Awww, how freaking cute was that when Alex asked if she was being famous. Lol, Kelly did every thing short of putting Alex in a plastic bubble. Lmao, "you hung up on god." It's nice to see Carrie not scared shitless of the go-carts, lol. Seriously though, awwww to the last part where their all racing and stuff. That was adorable.
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww very very very cuteee!!!!!! The part where ALex asks Kelly if shes being famous right now is halarious and so heart felt! awwww awww and some more aww!!great job!!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
At least Alex ate a little, and rest is good :) It's cool that Kelly got some rest, and that Carrie's not being special- I mean that she gets that Kelly's like pressing on and ignoring stuff. I don't want to be repetitive, but Kelly's always looking out and being concerned, it's a good thing and a sad thing right now. Cool updates :)
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, the update started out so great even though Kelly's still all emotionally shaky but it was all cute and stuff so I'm not gonna worry. Then the Doc had to go and ruin it by being bitchy. And then I was all mopey 'cause of the Alex stuff. Nice update.
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So yeah, I loved the update. I saw the first lyrics and had an "oh, no" moment, but I'm glad it wasn't as serious as I though. I loved that Carrie was bold and got to show Kelly some affection. Alex is so cute. I cannot wait to read more and see how the Texas trip goes. :)
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Double update...Woooooo..great job..i &m's(which are my favorite-->the peanut ones) and im soo tired!!! haha but great job!!
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I missed an update, I dunno, it's been one of those long weekends. The thing that really stood out to meet was that Kelly had lyrics written on her walls. I still don't like the doctor lady, but that's the point. I don't know why she can't chill out, she is getting paid to take care of Alex.