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by classic06

schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww! That was a great update. I loved Carrie being so protective of Kelly. "I've got you." *sigh* Cuteness. So yeah, more please? (And yes, I even updated in case you get that silly idea again. lol)
person Violence
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, a flashforward thingy. I was wondering where those went. The whole "Can you hold me? Like you used to? Remember?" line got me right in the heart. Hell, it freaking harpooned it with a vengeance. Really wonderfully sad chapter.
person Violence
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, the Doc is a bitch. Granted, she hasn't been brainwashed by hundreds of Kelly vids but still if you're gonna be traveling with a famous person at least read up on them. But the trio of cuteness at the end made up for it.
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Update!!!
That Doctor is a BIOOOTCHHH!!!I hope kelly ends up kicking her ass or something!! ALex and Kelly are adorable together, the way they interact with eachother could make any heart melt!! good job:)
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed seeing how Kelly, Jason and Carrie worked together (around the doctor lol). Kelly and Carrie are good with Alex, I'm sure they'll have fun once they get to Texas. Sweet update, thanks.
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so that was just awesome. I so loved how good both Carrie and Kelly are with Alex. So, um, I updated...and hopefully, you will return the favor. lol. 'Cause I cannot wait to read more.
person Violence
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alex was completely adorable in this chapter, especially when she was talking to Carrie about being nervous. I don't like the Doc, at all. She's gonna 'cause unnecessary problems, I just know it.
person King
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this since the very start but I'm not much of a reviewer.
This, however, was the most adorable chapter I've read and I just had to review.
I'm following your other Kelly/Carrie fic as well but this is my favorite of the two, mostly because I work with children who have cancer and I think it's amazing what you're writing here. If only so many others could care about them like you're writing...
It's a great story and am looking forward to the rest.
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Maybe someone can convince Kelly to get some sleep or something once Alex can go to Texas. Though I'm sure Kelly will be upset for awhile. Sad update, but I still want to know what happens next. :)
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, update! I loved it. I like that Alex is doing better (for the time being? *sniff*). Sooo...this Dr. Lansing, is it? This smells like trouble. lol. Can't wait to read more! :)

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