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by classic06

schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you made me cry! And I'm not usually a crier...so go you. lol. That was so heartwrenching. I liked Carrie admitting that she needed a hug. Though, I'd like to think that was her way of giving Kelly the hug she was afraid of asking for. I definitely can't wait to read more. (I'm already working on my next update, in case you get any ideas about holding it hostage...again. lol)
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well they did have sex. It sucks that they didn't get a chance to talk about what happened. They had a little while after Carrie woke up to talk, but not really because of the awkward factor. Even though they were awkward at first, Kelly did calm Carrie down a little in the car, and Carrie didn't really seem to have a problem talking- so that's good. Can't wait to see what happens next:)

p.s. Your explanation of the flashbacks during the main flashback made sense, and it was easy to read too.
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was just amazing. Sheer genius. Loved the way you incorporated the flashbacks. I was easy to keep up. Awesome story. Great job. I cannot wait read more...oh, and you totally reedemed yourself. jk lol. :)
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have tears in my eyes!!!:(:( that was soo sad!!!i knew it was going to happen eventually but its still so sad!!!! great update...and thanks for making me cry!!!:P:P:P
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I get a shout-out? Haha...score! Thanks :) And well, that was just hot. But um, "bare back?"? So you skipped that part? How could you! lol. Kidding. It was great. Loved it! And cannot wait for more.
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schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit. Kelly and Carrie totally just shacked up! HELL YES!! Hehe. The only thing I don't want to happen is one of them having temporary insanity and saying she regreted it. 'Cause that would break more than one heart.
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
buuttt...butttt...no details:O:O:O...is this a new way of telling the story!?!?!?!?!i looovved the update!!!! but why couldnt we read about all the fun;);)!!!!
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
P.S- ClarkWood- thankkkss..i cannot wait to see her live!! ive seen kelly twice already and shes amazing!!! but super excited for the show in october!!!!
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(small voice)I don't think they slept together.(small voice) If they did cool, but they did stop kissing at one point, so I dunno. The update was cute and great either way. I liked their joking and there were nice little things that I enjoyed. :)
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMGGGGGGGG
THIS WAS THE BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!!!!!!!!! HONESTLY...the gboing back and from the night before worked perfectly..it felt as if i was watching one of those movies!!!!...i love love loveeeedd it!!!! you did an amazing job!!!! o and im also reading your One Tree Hill ones and I love them by the way:):):):)

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