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by classic06

person Violence
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Damn. Way to give us a middle part. Carrie just got ravished by Kelly Clarkson... that's hot. I think my brain shut down for awhile there. As of now, this is by far my favoritest chapter. Everything was set up rather brilliantly, from the flashbacks to the things that set them off to their reactions. Perfect. Although I'm worried about how both of them are going to handle it since they never really got to talk, that last part gave me hope.

Thanks for getting this up so fast. You rock.
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have no idea how they are getting home unless cabs are called lol. I have a feeling Ann passed out after her first shot hee hee. Drunk Kelly is awesome, she called their night out a date, which let Carrie say the same :) Loved that Carrie downed her last shots so fast when Kelly promised to dance with her. I'm not sure who is more aware and showing of their feelings, before this update I would have said Carrie- but drunk Kelly holds nothing back (so far).
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, but um....that's just mean. I read the lyrics thinking "ooh, boy, here we go" and nope. It ended with "yea" and I was thinking: "Noooooo...wait!" Gah...cannot wait to read more. Update soon? :)
person Violence
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how they call Carrie Kelly's girl, it's sweet. I second that, they should get drunk more often. Especially if they're gonna be like that everytime. If Carrie's staying over only good things can come from that. Snuggles?
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
short but sweet..i loved it:):)
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I completely forgot that the others came in a limo. Good one :) Ashey's "I'm just buzzed" had me laughing. I liked the update, Carrie was much more direct with her actions and voicing her thoughts, but I believe Kelly's way was more effective. Usually she's all taking care of everyone and checking with them. She pretty much guaranteed that Carrie would stay the night at her place by having the driver go to her place first. Cool update.
person Violence
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lmao, Jason's too drunk to perform. That last paragraph looking thingy was really suggestive about could have happened. Can't wait for more.
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW
THAT was a hot hot hot hot hot scene!!!! its funny im reading this today because i went out to a country bar in toronto last night and we did something along the lones of taking i dont ven know how many shots at once!!! haha good times!!! but AWWSSSOMMME UPDATE!!!!
p.s- I GOT 7TH ROW SEATS TO CARRIE UNDERWOOD CONCERT!!!! WOOOHOOO
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Only one word to describe this: Hot! I loved that Kelly can hold her liquour and used it to basically bribe Carrie. Gotta say there' something about her saying "Dance. Now." Ok! ;) Great update and I'm at the edge of my seat waiting for more. Please?

PS. Storyteller, congrats on the Carrie show. You will NOT be disappointed. Girl can sing...and is beyond gorgeous. =)
person greens28
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet chapter. I am really starting to get into this one big time. I don't know how you come up w/ such great stories-but don't change. You are doing a great job. Love it!!1

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