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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay! I love, love, love your update! That was so sweet of Kelly to be so concerned for Carrie. Beyond cute. Can't wait for more. :)
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Carrie wasn't sick for that long. Kelly made it better. It's so great how they interact with each other. Oh man, those two at a bar with alcohol and sexual tension. That should be an interesting update, lol.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I probably shouldn't have thought it was adorable when Carrie pretended like she didn't know who Graham was, but I did. lol Kelly was kickass standing up for herself :) I probably also shouldn't have found it a little funny when Kelly told Jason that she and Carrie would be fine on their own when he offered to help. Cool update.
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww whats wrong with Carey!! Finally Kelly tells graham exactly whats on her mind!!! looking forward to the next chapter!!!great job
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, that's gotta hurt just a little. And what's up with Carrie and these moments of sickness? Is it even normal? I've got a feeling that might be a problem later on. Oh yay, so Kelly kicked his ass, maybe not physically but metally I think she defeated him. Aww, I love how Carrie becomes Kelly's main concern when she herself isn't doing that great either.
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July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, Kelly told him off! I'd been hoping she'd do that, because I always thought she seems like the type of person who can be vulnerable but is a real bad ass when something's pissing her off. It was cute how she was telling Graham off and then switched into worry-mode as soon as she was with Carrie again. And is she like really sick, because there's been all these little moments where it seems as if she really is. Interesting, I can't wait for the next update.
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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I bet if Jason knew what Graham has been doing he would take a swing at Graham lol. Kind of random, but I liked that Carie helped Kelly put her makeup back on. Like, yeah, it was cute that they were so close and all, it was just funny in a continuity type of way. Very cute, and sad, update- though I still want Carrie to be mean to Graham, or embarrass him in front of people. :)
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow-I had 2 catch up-I guess I missed the last chapter. Anyway U continue to write great stuff. Very emotional & touching moments for the girls. I am very impressed with how you continue to come up w/ great stories..
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They were both so cute. Kelly had a really nice idea with the carriag, and Carrie was pretty sweet too with the way she interacted with Kelly. I think Michael pretty much screwed up any chance of Carrie ever liking him lol. I hope that Kelly doesn't let Graham see how much it shocked her to see him, unless it means Carrie gets to be protective because Graham says something jerky. Great update, thanks for posting two of them.
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Kelly. Someone's gonna kick his ass, right? Maybe Kelly can lure him outside where Carrie's waiting with the horses and she'll run him over. Don't know how effective that'll be but it works. And just when I thought the tension couldn't get higher... it did.