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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! A super long one. You're forgiven! Haha, Carrie's bad in bed. Maybe Kelly could teach her how to not be so bad in bed? Just an idea. Aww, a heart finder. Better yet Kelly found Carrie's heart. Subtext - you write it wonderfully. And the wingman part, I don't know what it was but I found in really funny. Have I said I love the snuggles, yet?
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol I wonder how long until the people at the photo shoot talk about what they heard Carrie say about herself to Kelly, and if Michael will hear about it? j/k Kelly has a backwards way of flirting, subconscious or not lol she shouldn't talk badly about her body image to try and say Carrie looks good. Or maybe Kelly was just having a self conscious moment. They still had some reactions to one another :) Thanks for posting two of the updates.
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It made me giggle that Carrie made Kelly some cookies. Kelly was cute with her little embarrassed mistake at the beginning of the chapter, and then again later with the t-shirt. If they fall asleep, I hope it's not for too long, Jason would probably worry over Kelly because it didn't seem like she had time to call and tell him she was with Carrie, or maybe I just missed it. Cool update :)
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. I think that was almost too adorable. Carrie got a Texas shirt for Kelly and she made her cookies. I don't see why Kelly doesn't just jump her right then and there. And I loved the part about the Texas shirt being stuck to the Oklahoma shirt because Oklahoma is totally spooning Texas. Seriously, have you ever looked at a map and noticed that?
I love the snuggles. And the sexual tension is building. Whoo!
I love the snuggles. And the sexual tension is building. Whoo!
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this ones cute:) i loved it
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kelly was funny- smiling at Michael as she walked out with Carrie. And I don't know if this was supposed to be funny or not, but I seriously thought "wtf?" when Carrie asked Kelly if she had tasted the cookie. Like... I don't know, that was just such a strange question, it made me laugh. Funny update :)
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. They are so cute & playful together. I like that they are counting on each other & helping each other ( Carrie driving Kelly around). I love how they are with the kids-it is so warm. I loved the last line about Ace wanting Kelly to come over-especially about the part about Carrie telling Ace that Kelly was into going to nude beaches. That was great & made me smile & laugh uncontrolably. Thanks. Love it!!
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
We all know Kelly was secretly jealous of Michael. I seriously laughed my ass off at Ace wanting to go to a nude beach with Kelly. They're too cute together. XD
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Jason read the text, Carrie read it. Frowning is not an indication of happiness, so let's hope for Graham's sake that he and Carrie don't meet up soon lol. I love that Kelly tried to cook eggs in the microwave. I mean it's one of those things that sounds good in theory, but obviously trying stuff like that out proves that you cannot take short cuts when it comes to cooking certain things. Sleep deprived Kelly is snarky, I like it. Cool update :)
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More interesting bedtalk. It was a nice little unguarded moment when Kelly told Carrie about the being held thing. The conversation about AI was a nice way of bringing up how Carrie goes along with things, like their opinion of her in this chapter, it really played nicely back on what happened at the photo shoot. Cool chapter :) It was funny, especially that part about Ace running off. It goes without saying that Kelly was awesome, of course. And you did get my sn right. Tanks for letting me know that it was the sleep thing :)