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great update, very sweet.I love your stories....thanks for updating.please continue

Last stop for the night/morning. I love that the girls had a talk about what all came up in the little verbal spar with Shanna in chapter 107 before Carrie left. It's good to get all of that out in the open, so that nothing's being hidden any longer. Hahaha, Kate using German and Kelly correcting her cracked me up. I'm glad that Kelly has Kate to talk to about all the stuff dealing with her relationship with Carrie, even if Kate's a bit torn between Kelly and Jill. And their little plotting at the end was adorable. Oh lord, Kate's quip of "I'm not one for threesomes, sorry sweetie" had me laughing so hard, what a great line. And I love how Carrie and Kelly just skip completely over the romantic night Kel had worked so hard for, but hey, the outcome was so worth it. Kate giving the girls a heads up in the last chapter was good, especially with Kelly's response to Kate's "A little too much fun last night?" Hahaha. I'm glad that Shanna apologized for how she acted towards Kelly and while it's not much, it's better than nothing really. I have a feeling it's going to be mighty awkward with Jill around for a while before they let her in, but I did love the fan club comment and Carrie's tease at Kelly's "Who wouldn't want to be a Care Bear?", so evil yet so great.

I don't think the best way to help with winning Jill over is to leave her standing around awkwardly, lol. It was nice to see that Ashley and Kate being cool though, I'm sure that made Kelly and Carrie feel a little less nervous. I admit I got a little nervous when Kelly noticed how wiped out Carrie was, and I thought "No, don't tire Carrie out! She's sick!" Stupid, I know, but I did think it.

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Hahahah, Carrie's teasing Kelly so much and she can't do anything about it. I love it. rofl, the care bears. Almost as funny as the kezbos. Personally, I'd be like screw shopping and just stay in the hotel room all day, lol.

Oh damn was the adorable. She was all worried. "I'm not one for threesomes, sorry sweetie," ROFL. That'd be, um... interesting, lol. Hahahahah, I absolutely love that they were all over each other about five seconds after Carrie walked in. And Kelly forgot all about her attempt at recreating, lol. Yeah, that last part owned.

I just don't get how U keep coming up with such great material. Awesome job.

i really love the first quote you used and the fact hat they're in france :D gah!!

For some reason I find Carrie having been a virgin until Kelly as freakishly cute. Kinda makes me go aw. But I'm so glad Kelly's not freaking out about Carrie not telling her or about the whole thing in general. Ohhh no, that's not good. If Kate's right about Jill both Kelly and Carrie are already gonna have one out on both sides. "I feel like a total douche" Hahah, douche. I believe if Kelly had known she'd still have had her way with her. Lol, I can't wait til Carrie gets there. Looks like she's in for it now.

Upside? Carrie's going to get some time away in France, and Kelly's plan should help take her mind off her sister. I kinda liked that Carrie asked Kelly if she thought they were making a mistake, cuz it was sweet and all; but then I was like... yeah she hasn't told Kelly about whatever's wrong with her, so it was like a bittersweet moment in a way. I totally get it, it's like why she didn't say anything about being a virgin, just kinda sad that she feels that she can't be completely honest. Of course she did see how Kelly's going to react (because of Alex) so that's another reason. Cool update, I liked it a lot. Hope Jill (hope i got her name right, if not I'm sorry) doesn't accidentally walk in on Kelly's plans for Carrie lol.