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Keeps getting better & better. Really love it. Glad that Kelly is there for Carrie.

YOU LEFT IT THERE?! Nooooo, please update! Pleeeeeeeeeeeease?! I never expected Shanna to react that way, I really never. They finally got together and already things don't seem to be going well. :( Is there something wrong with Carrie? I mean there were the headaches and Alex noticing, but I thought they were stress related, but then there was that comment and now I'm not so sure - cuz I think I might cry if Carrie's ill cuz it did when Alex died, so I'm hoping for the best. I love how Carrie gave Kelly the sticky note, best song ever. I hope you update soon and now I'm annoyed because once again I've read through this in like two freaking days and I only have one of your stories left to read and I'm so taking my time with it, cause I looooove your writing. Can't wait for an update, but I think I mentioned that before? I'm just gonna post this now, m'kay?

Yeah. what Dani said. Ha, i totally called that part about Shanna not reacting so calmly. At least she doesn't hate Carrie... that's a start. A trend? That's kinda low for someone to say especially to their sister who they're pretty damn close to. Holy shit! Kelly was Carrie's first!? Never would have fathomed that one. Talk about bombshell. Carrie either spends a lot of time by herself or she's just that good. I laughed so hard when Shanna called Kelly a gay whore. It sounds too absurd to be a real insult. "That wasn't the only time, and it only got better when we were sober." Props to Kelly, takes some major balls to say that to your girlfriends older sister. And I'm so relieved that Kelly stood her ground and didn't freak out or even seem that phased that Carrie never told her she was her first. Sucks that Shanna couldn't handle it.

Hell no, why in God's name would we mind? Your double updates light up my week ^^

Poor Carrie.. I hope Shanna get's over it, damnit.. Those girls deserve to be happy !!

I have mixed feelings for the people in this chapter. Part of me wants to get upset because of the things Shanna called Kelly, but the other part of me can kinda understand where she's coming from. She totally thought her little sister might have met a guy, so to find out that her assumption was right, but very very wrong... lol. Nice job of including how close Shanna and Carrie are/were. I'm glad you didn't split the updates up :)

Oh man... Shanna's reaction totally had me reeling. Poor Carrie, I was so nervous for her through the entire first part. And now I'm even more curious as to what's wrong with Carrie after the comment Shanna made. But I'm glad Kelly went to see her and defend their relationship to Shanna, Carrie needed to hear that Kelly would be there for her.

Oh boy... this fic has broken my heart quite a bit but then it's gone and patched it back up as well. I love that this is all one big flashback, it's an interesting way to present a story because mostly they're given in "real time." I love the kids and their interactions with Kelly and Carrie. Really, all the characterizations in this are great. Kate and Ashley had me in stitches in the last chapter with their jokes about Shanna's age. And both Kelly and Carrie have me awwing at them so much. I've spanned so many emotions in reading this, and that's a great thing that I love in fics. I really love this.

I wonder if Kelly scored or lost points when she wouldn't tell Shanna who Carrie was dating, lol. It was nice to see that Kate liked Carrie, even though that was pretty much a given. Ashley is such a smartass. I'm kinda curious about the song Kelly sang in the studio, though I'm sure it's not important storywise.

woo! Boys Like Girls. Totally recognized them just from seeing them. Hahaha, "I was curious." Ashley's response to that was the best. Awww, they're already one of those couples that get that starry-eyed stare when they look a each other. I love that Ashley and Kate were ragging on Shanna's age throughout the whole thing, lol. Oh man, Ashley's gay comment was hilarious. Kelly's all worried and it's cute. Loved this update, laughed a lot and that's always a good thing.

One down, two to go, lol. I have no idea how Carrie's sister is going to react, but at least they had a nice lunch if it all goes wrong. It sucks that one of Kelly's friends is going to be against the relationship, but it happens. It'll be nice for Kelly to have another person she can talk to fully with while she's in France though. Cool update.