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man ive missed this story! still love it!

Awww, that whole conversation with Kate was so sweet. I was kinda scared for a minute though, Kate totally could have freaked out and hauled ass outta there. Glad she didn't though but now i'm worried about how Jill's gonna find out and her reaction. She's probably gonna walk in on them since they never lock the doors, lol. I have a feeling Shanna isn't gonna react as calmly as she did in PWF, you don't really do the same thing twice. And that makes me curious. Damn, Shanna's that old? Does this mean Carrie was an accident?

I loved the beginning of this. so adorable! Lol. I love Ashley. She's great for some comedic relief. I'm glad Kelly told Ashley that they were actually dating. I'm also pretty damn happy that she didn't scare herself into saying no. That would have killed us all.

I kinda felt like Carrie passed a test of sorts in that first scene. Obviously not a formal test, and that Kelly is nervous about relationships, but it was cute. Ashley breaking in the middle of the road was funny. They were lucky someone wasn't behind them. It was nice to read that Ashley is concerned for Kelly, but stopping in the road is a no-no, lol.

I didn't think that they would get together in this chapter, so good job surprising me :) That being said, I'm glad that they got together in this chapter. I liked that Kelly said something along the lines of being glad about not having to worry about where they stand. I also liked that Carrie asked if Kelly was sure. Like of course she knew that Kelly had thought about the effects it would have on them and everyone, but it was nice still.I'm glad that they'll get to spend some time in France together :)

WOOHOO! so damn happy Kelly said yes. It's nice to see that they're both going about this rationally instead of just plowing ahead. Can only imagine what the reactions of Jill, Kate, and one of Carrie's sister will be. I'm hoping they won't get disowned.

Oh no, Ashley said the bad words. No one should ever say "it's going to be fine", or any other words to that effect, in a story. It's never fine once those words have been said, lol. I kinda hope I'm wrong though. Although I was surprised that Kelly said she would meet up with Carrie when she doesn't know one way or another. I don't know about anyone else, but I would be very disappointed and a little angry if someone made me wait a whole day (not to mention however many months it's been) to hear "I'm scared and I don't want to be hurt. I don't know what to say." And Kelly probably wouldn't say that first part lol.

aw poor kelly! she has nothing to worry about! carrie loves her

I have only one comment for the chapter before this one. FINALLY. Oh Carrie. That was smooth. Ashley is so damn perceptive. I love it. And after the last update I was positive Kelly'd be elated Carrie finally asked her. But now I'm not so sure Kelly will say yes 'cause she scared but she has to say yes. It's just not right any other way. Here's to hoping for a happy end.

that was beautiful :) and yay for 100 chapters! can't wait for the next 100 ;) :P

i always love the lyrics you chose to quote. they're never cheesy