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those last 8 or so chappies, made me bawl!

Your such a wonderful author and I love all your Avenged Sevenfold stories, but this one would have to be my favorite. I'm so glad I kept reading, even though the dark parts. It was such a wonderful story and such a wonderful ending. Keep up the amazing work!

This might be my new favorite story of yrs. I usually dont re-read stuff on here but this one I def would.
You went all over the place.Every chapter was kinda like WTF? in a good way.
I really liked yr take on Limbo and Matt having wings was badass.
And of course I loved (are you getting sick of ppl using the word loved yet?)
Sex Drive/Reality/Denial,it was cool to see them used in a story that was serious.

awe, is this the end?

damn it update soon seriously... I love the tv idea... I might steal it *shifty eyes* really fantastic story, but one thing has been bugging me, why the fuck did matt get shot in the first place...

Okay, honestly I have no idea how to get around on this website lol! Your suggestion are wounderufl although a couple of them are two similar I know Im going to Keep Cave that's for sure. and one of the water realted ones. and mostlikely mistake and possiply timewarp or super natural. :) but then again we will see what rolls around Im sorry I'm posting this in a review because I haven't exactly read ur story yet!

So yeah. Just I wanted to let you know I was infact keeping some of your suggestions. And if someone could come up with a D I could possible write one that has Cave and forest as well as a D word all together. :) But I dunno that kind of ruins it.. again sorry for taking up your review! feel free to E-mail me. :)
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AWE.

there best be some sort of happy ending because i was to close to tears when i read this... then seize the day came on my shuffle and yea, *tears* more soon please

OMG!!!!!!!! I cried so much with these last few chapters, thats so sad, but I just loved how you captured the emotion and made me cry my eyes out like a baby!!!!!!!!!!!!! Is Zack going to get any better?!?!

Just in case you were wondering, I SO didn't stop reading this! I just never got around to reviewing.

I must admit, you've thrown me for a loop. I always figured Brian would go on a murdering rampage, and so when some random dudes were responsible for the killing I was all "wayt wut?"

Yes, exactly in a dumb kind of way, too.

So, have I told you I'm loving this story? 'Cause I am. Very much so.