AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for Twisted

by ClarkWoodFan

schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I swear cliff hangers are so overated!!! haha Carrie is kinda playing hard to get its halarious!! i think kelly will eventually just jump her!!!lol newways great update:)
person Violence
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The Black Pearl? What an original name, lol. I'm just kidding, I thought it was funny more than anything else. I can't believe Carrie called Kelly a nympho, too funny. Why do I have the feeling that everything isn't as safe as you say it is? We're gonna get bangage and then something terrible's gonna happen. The boat's probably capsize or something as equally freaky. Ahh, good update anyway.
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, seriously they're so adorable. have i mentioned that i love this story? if not, then i seriously love this story, and i am so glad you started writing it. update soon!
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww, cuteness. and somehow i skipped the last update, don't know how in the hell i missed that, lol, but yea, hottness all around.
person Violence
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lmao, "I like this view." Oh my god, go Jason. He should win the best brother ever award.
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, let's see, stay on land and away from sharks, or go on the boat for alone time with carrie...i totally agree with kelly's decision on that one, lol.
person Violence
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think someone needs to tell Kelly that Jaws isn't real, lol. That part of the hats not really concealing their identities is so true. They need to work on getting better at going incognito. The bit about being girlfriends was cute. So I take it someone's gonna get laid in the next chapter?
person Violence
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, hello happyland - my permanent place residence. First reaction: tehehehehehe. Second reaction: daaaaaaaaaaamn. Third reaction: WHOO!
So yeah, definitely my favorite chapter by far.
person Violence
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ye-ah!! I have to agree with the other two. That's was pretty damn hot. Go foreplay.
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*pokes computer screen* i think my computer's broken cause i don't see an update *pokes again* lol, no honestly, i'm bored to death, so pleasseee update. : p --how can you say no to that cute face? lol

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?