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honestly, i don't know how you do it. your are amazing and all your stories are kick-ass-AMAZING! cute chapter and i can't wait to see how carries first game goes.

Oh Carrie. That's subtle. Real subtle. Carrie totally wanted to be Kelly's first kiss. rawr. Innocent my ass. She wants to jump her bones so badly. That was an awesome plot event. Loved it.

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story! It was so cute! Carrie and KElly's first kiss! I can't wait for more!!!

Pretty sure I wasn't supposed to find Stacey trying to hook people up as funny, but it kinda was since she was drunk, lol. I also liked that Kelly agreed with Matt about Carrie being hot when she described her. Jeff? Jeff sucks though, like he was obviously the cool boy, but it was uncool for him to lie to get Carrie alone. He was also majorly uncool when he continued to try to kiss Carrie after she said no. I really liked the convo after the party, they're so not going to anymore of Stacey's parties, lol. I did laugh when Kelly was "defending" her kiss with Steven Tyler, and when Carrie tried to help Kelly with the faking kissing thing. Mostly I laughed because she did it in front of the whole play crew. Although, I did find it cute that Kelly got a little caught up with how close Carrie was to her during that. I think that was a definite motivation as to why Kelly brought up kissing Carrie at the end. Also loved that she was brave enough to be honest after the kiss. Yeah, I know, it wasn't like she was admitting anything deep, but saying that her lips were all tingly is still kinda big in Kelly world. I really enjoyed the entire update, all the scenes were good :)

HOT!

Ashley could have talked about the sexual side of the song in another way, but I don't see why she would. I'm not saying that what went down was cool; but she was bringing the subject in a straight forward manner, that is generally how she and Kelly interact. Kelly kinda over reacted I think, though I think she had a valid point since her friends have teased her about it before, although not quite at the right time/situation. It was cool to see Carrie be supportive, but not just automatically saying what Kelly wanted to hear. She made sure that she knew what song Kelly was talking about, and then again when Kelly mentioned that her friends teased her about her inexperience. It was sweet how they acted at the party, they switched up the supportive roles, and that's always a good thing.

Uh-oh... I can just smell the trouble coming from Carrie calling Kelly 'baby' in front of Stacey.. I hope they don't get in to a fight
moving on

Those two are just too cute together.. I absolutely love it ^^

hahaha, oh the memories! lol loved this chapter!

Oh hey, cuddles. LMAO, lesbian softball. How would Carrie's mom know about that? If Carrie still doesn't believe her she could always go watch Bring It On. Awwww, that's sweet of Kelly to switch her schedule just to check Carrie out. Baby and All-star? I can only imagine the look on Carole's face if she ever heard them use those nicknames. There will be hell to pay. They're both so innocent to the subtle flirting they're doing. It's cute.

lol Carrie wasn't allowed to play softball 'this' year, I wonder why? I'm sure Carrie's dad is going to love to get to go to some softball games. Kelly's explanation for why she doesn't sleep was hilarious, especially the way Carrie reacted. That was so totally a friend type of exchange, and it was great. It was definitely sweet that Kelly switched shifts so that she could make it to Carrie's softball try out. The conversation in the dugout was cool, Kelly rocks. Great update, I really enjoyed all of the scenes.