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YES!! Kelly is officially the hottest girl ever!...only rivaled by miss Carrie. lol these two rock. Oh and Carrie's mom sucks...but its fun to watch Kelly piss her off. Whoa!!

Don't know how I feel about Carrie and Kelly going to the popular chick's party, that oughta be interesting in its own right, though I liked how they got on with Kelly's friends at the restaurant. There was quite a bit of funny in this chapter to make up for the not so fun parts. I liked how this chapter was like a little arc in itself, before now Kelly telling Carrie about big things have been spread out over a few updates, but it was done in one update this time. And, thanks for the link, I hadn't seen that before. Hope you had a nice Thanksgiving :)

I know I said I wouldn't go back and pick out details but I just have to on this one. It's just so twisted and juicy over here. First of all, Carrie's dad being in a wheelchair was the big secret. Definitely unexpected. And she was ashamed of her dad being in a wheelchair. Shallow much, Carrie? I love that Kelly was such a sweetheart about it. And that chapter where pretty much all they did was talk about sex - way to lay out the ground early. I loved reading the first snuggle session, yum. This Carole is such a frigid bitch compared to the pwf Carole, same goes for Jeanne and Stephen. And I honestly love that their roles are all switched up, makes it that much more exciting. I would looooooove to know why Carole has such disdain for Kelly already. I mean all she did was attempt to look for food. And that makes it grounds for condemnation? I still love the little hints of foreshadowing. They make me smile. Oh no, going to one of Stacey's parties. Is Carrie insane? Curiosity killed the cat. Haha, Carrie is such a dude sometimes when it comes to reading feelings.

Jezus Christ, you really own like a Kelly encyclopedia or somethin' ? You know just about everything she ever mentioned, don't you? Which is very cool.. Also, a bit scary but ah well, it's not like you're parked out in front of her house or something =D

as always, a lovely chapter update. also, happy turkey day to you! can't wait for the next chapter

Carole is so riding the evil fence, though at least Jeanne is cool. Carrie's dad was so cute with Kelly what with talking about wanting to see the trees Carrie had painted lol. And of course, Kelly and Carrie were cute. It was cool to see them talking about Kelly's future. They both had some pretty funny lines in the last two updates. Sorry that I've been commenting like once a week, but school is winding down, so hopefully I'll be able to comment on the chapters when you post them soon (a week and a half left of school wheeee!) Serious though, the last two updates were good. :)

Great chapter.. one question though 'If you could see inside my head, then you would understand' isn't that Unstoppable by The Calling ?

I really like how comfortable they are with each other. I'm liking the twist of making Carrie be older (even if it's just a month...lol). For the record, now *I* am thinking about Chili's...ha. Good update.

haha a wonderful chapter update! more please?!

I'm glad that Mr. Underwood sees Kelly for who she is, even if his wife is being so stuck up. lol. I really like the interactions between the girls. Carrie might be on to something about Kelly being bothered by Carole. Can't wait to see what happens and how Brigadoon turns out. BTW, you must be like a KC encyclopedia or something...lol. Rock on! ;)