rate_review Reviews

okay so i LOVED LOVED LOVED all the dialog between the girls. kinda seems like they talked more in this chapter then in the whole story so far. lol nah, jk. but seriously, the teasing and talking was too cute. they totally play off each others words and it works sooooo well. keep it up, you rock!

so, i am sooooo happy that you updated! oh and kudos to carrie for finally opening up to kelly about her family. thats a pretty interesting situation that she's in, though. ah and i totally laughed out loud and the monkey-crap comment that kelly made to ashley! i love that girl! please please please keep the wonderful dates coming!! can't wait to find out how spendin' the night at carries house goes!!

I'm glad that Carrie was finally open with Kelly about her weirdness regarding her family. Nice to see Mr. Underwood isn't in the mob. lol. Kidding aside, it's sad that he's paralized...it does give an interesting dimension to the story. Oh, and Carrie's gonna be playing softball? *sigh* Me like! ;)

It was cute when Kelly was so pleased that Carrie was breathing from her stomach. Kelly's got her friends, but it was sweet to see her reaction kinda like it backed up her talent in singing/music. Also, it was funny as hell that Kelly hit her head on the desk. Sadly, I have done similar things in past math classes, though at least I had a book to cushion the blow. lol Cool update.

Chemistry was the worst high school subject ever. I fell asleep almost everyday in that class. I'm happy to see them finally communicating and sharing little stuff about themselves. Kinda sweet actually. Just like it was sweet of Carrie to wake up Kelly so she wouldn't get busted for sleeping. And what the hell is up with Carrie being so hesitant to bring Kelly over to her house? Hmmm.

haha, an "A" huh? well it's a "A" for awesome!

I love that Kelly studied and got an A...I don't think I would if were in her shoes. Too distracting. lol I'm still wondering what the deal is with Carrie being so skittish about taking Kelly home. What dark secret could she have? Anyway. As always awesome job. More soon, I hope.

Sweet, a intriguing parental update. I am still wondering what is up with Carrie's dad's job. It sucks that Kelly got an in school suspension, but at least it was only for a day. On a brighter note, I cracked up that Ashley admitted to missing when Carrie arrived late to class because she was half asleep.

aw that was kinda sad. but i still wanna read more. tehe

Oh wow. i missed so key updates since I've last visited. One of the last things I remember is them behind a cardboard cut out. Or maybe it was a concert at a bar? okay, yeah I just did a mass reading thing and yeah, it was the Toadies concert in a bar. Brain thought process was something like Toadies - possum kingdom - i will treat you well, my sweet angel, so help me jesus - yeah! And damn, go protective Kelly. "How do you do that?" "Magic." One of my all time favorite responses to that question. I love all these little hints being splattered around about what Kelly's destined to do for a living. And it makes me curious as to how far up in time this is gonna go and how alternate universe it would be if we actually made it up to 2002. I'd love to see it... *cough*