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I loved the update!! Can't wait for more! A sleepover yay!

Well, that was very, fun game. lol. Another amazing update from you...loved it! I can't wait to see how this goes, having Carrie sleeping over, and seeing what other "KC Originals" make it onto the story (BoY, perhaps?). Anyway. More soon, please! :)

I loved that Ashley got Kelly and Carrie in gear, though she made it very clear that she wouldn't allow Carrie to be around if she didn't makeup with Kelly lol. Another thing that I loved? That they were in the movie theater late at night, in the movie I mentioned, something similar happened. Kids just like going into places they aren't supposed to be when they are underage, don't they? j/k I like that they made up so quickly, it's so high school. One week you're mad at your best friend over something trivial (like Carrie's dad's job?), and the next you're not. Although, Kelly's reason for being upset was more than a bit trivial, in general everything seems huge in HS. Can't wait for the next part to see what a girl's night is in Texas.

insanely cute! i love how these two interact. and kelly's little speeches are totally adorable. i'm hooked!

They're insanely cute together... I love how you write them, especially Kelly (I have this major crush on Miss KC, lol).
Are you gonna use more of Kelly's songs in it? Or Carrie's songs? What is the deal with Carrie's dad? I don't like getting hooked on stories but I can't help it with this one so, come on, another update?

Lol, it's nice to know the conflict was resolved a chapter later. "It's a KC original." "Who's Casey?" I swear I damn near keeled over in laughter. Effin brilliant. Haha, I didn't know the choir room wasn't open to the public. Good on Ashley for actually have the patience to spell it out for her. Cell phone? Wha? Don't you mean pay phone? I mean we are talking like 1999 here... right? Awww, that little make up in the movie theater was insanely cute.

I'm liking this story. Can totally see it happening. Can't wait for the next update!

Yay! So not only are you a kickass writer, but you're also a Kelly guru? K, I'm officialy a fan. Props to you! :) I really liked this chapter. I'm glad they are talking again and working on this "friendship." Kelly sure takes them seriously, huh? lol. Cannot wait for more, but isn't that what I always say? :)

Awe I'm glad they made up! =)!!

Addicted! That has got to be my fav song. This update was very emotional, and it was awesome. I can hazard a few guesses as to why Kelly was singing addicted, and I can't wait to find out. I liked brooding Kelly, even though you haven't seen the movie I mentioned, you are so managing to write Kelly as James Dean's char in it. I'm not sure really why Ashley was talking to Carrie, other than the fact that she's curious as to what is really going on with Carrie. Can't wait for the next update :)