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by classic06

person Mo56
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok that has to be the sweetest, not to mention hottest, thing that carrie has ever done in one of your stories! i love it!
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Jessica got Kelly motivated to do something about the situation with Ashley. I'm not sure if I was supposed to feel bad for Ashley or not, but I did feel a little badly for her when she was trying to tell Kelly. She couldn't even say if she was gay, straight or bi; that has to be difficult to deal with let alone explain to the person who is the one confusing everything. I'm glad that Kelly said that she didn't have feelings for Ashley. Like she wouldn't have lied, but trying to let Ashley down easier, or running off, would have been misleading in a way. I was also glad to see that Kelly didn't immediately accept that she and Ashley were going to go back to normal. She's learned one thing from the experience, probably the most important thing, lol. And Carrie's forward streak continues with getting Kelly undressed. I chuckled that she told Kelly to do it, but she was already undressing.
person Violence
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha. At least in one of these stories they remembered to lock the door. ...can they get anymore obvious? I mean come on, who asks their friend to teach them how to kiss? I firmly believe that Kelly knows exactly what she's doing; she so wants Carrie. whoa, fiesty Ashley. lol, Carrie's so good at making Ashley jealous. wonder if Ashley will ever tell Kelly.
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I kinda got the feeling that Kelly was nervous when they were kissing, but some of the things she said were kinda strange, so I think she was playing a little too. It doesn't matter either way I guess, but I did like the scene. Especially because it gave Carrie the courage/permission (wow that just reads weird, but I think you know what I mean) to say something to Ashley. Some of the things Ashley thought/said made sense. You can see how she would compare the nicknames Kelly calls her and Carrie, and I actually thought: go Ashley, when she told Kelly to take a look at what was going on around her. It would have been better if Ashley had admitted her feelings for Kelly, but it was kind of a step in the right direction. I totally giggled when she called Carrie Babrie, lol. I'm glad Carrie stood up for Kelly, that she seems more assured of her place with Kelly, but wow, Ashley was lucky that Carrie hadn't heard what had been said exactly or the bitching out that occurred would have been way worse.
person Violence
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This new review thing sucks. Hahaha, Carrie's such a wimp. Kelly has a brilliant set of friends. Teach me? lol. that's such a cover up for her true desires. I love how Carrie made it look like she actually had to think about it. Everyone already knows they've got the hots for each other. What a glorious day that will be.
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Carrie's is much more sympathetic than me, I didn't feel that bad that Ashley watched Kelly kiss Carrie, lol. I'm glad that no one had their feelings seriously hurt though because Jessica and Carrie pretty much shut down anything that would go somewhere that it shouldn't have. I know the girls were just trying to tease Kelly, but they wouldn't let that kissing thing go, dorks. I liked that Kelly got Carrie's drink, random, I know, but it was cute. The kiss in the kitchen made me laugh. Like, Carrie just had to show Kelly what she went... yeah right, she wanted to kiss Kelly again. So, I'm sure somewhere in her head she's excited that Kelly asked her to teach her how to kiss.
person Mo56
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, i thought kelly and carrie were going to get caught making out!...sneeky sneeky!
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I remember thinking that it would be a bad idea for Carrie's mom and Kelly's mom to talk(or maybe I thought it was a good way for Carrie's mom to get over her dislike of Kelly?) but yeah, I don't think it would be such a good idea now. I think Jeanne would get pissed at Carrie's mom lol. Ashley's feelings for Kelly are not going to stay a secret for long if people keep talking, though it's good that Ashley has someone else to talk to about the situation. The play director should totally call Eric on his crap... and then Ashley and Carrie can go beat him up. Steve rules :)
person Mo56
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well kelly rocked at the play...that was totally a given. eric is an ass...even though we all can understand why he would like kelly and want to kiss her. i still kinda want to see more scenes where kelly and carrie are together around ashley...call me cruel, but those are super fun!
person Violence
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whoa! no fucking way. Ashley's in love with Kelly? Hahahaha. That's awesome. Didn't even think that was going to happen. I get why Ashley just won't come out and say it but wow, if you feel that strongly and it's senior year what's really gonna happen? Good on Carrie for not making Ashley hate her more by telling Kelly. The Kelly/Carrie action is definitely heating up though. Wonder what'll happen if anyone ever walks in on that.

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