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by SujiChan

schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you're updating so fast. its awesome.
i love the banter between the brothers
its written very well.
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yea, date with Toshiya!
i'm still pulling for
him.
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was a quick update! omg...
intense! every chapter is so much better
than the last. what a hot story.
keep it up, i'm dying from the suspense ^-^
so glad Toshiya finally stepped up. she
better pick him. although if you wanted
to make this a super long story i wouldn't
object to maybe kaoru getting interested
too.^_- but either way in the end i am hoping
she ends up with Toshiya.
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
how could you leave us hanging like that? you're mean :)
great job on chap 14. poor Toshiya, will he ever get a chance
to talk to her? she's in deep now. your story is so addictive.
keep up the great work. :)

thanks for reviewing my story. i know it has errors but i forgot the authors note
that should have said it was written at 4 in the morning, and i was half
asleep. it was also my first fanfic.
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is by far the best story on the site rite now.
person Kimigurl
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“I just realized how evil you are,” Kyo’s gaze was narrowed on the blond male. “I like it.”
LOL I love Kyo...yay! Toshiya likes her! Go Toshiya!...I'd so go for Toshiya.
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, so glad to see you updated so quickly. loved this chap. you are doing such a great job. can't wait till the next date.
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome job on chap 11. you make me want to scream at your characters...lol.
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome story. Once I started reading it I couldn't quit. Can't wait for your next chap. ^^
person Kimigurl
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story! I can't wait for the rest of it! Please write more!

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