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by writer101

person greens28
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting...So Kelly knows. Great job-I am loving this. Keep up the good work...
person Violence
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so this started off amazingly enough with them getting along AND having sex. Major plus there. Lol at Carrie giving Jakob away just so she could have her way with her wife. And then at the very end you throw a curve ball like that and make it a dreadful CLIFFHANGER. I hate cliffies, they're absolute toture. But wow, that was heat stopping and wince worthy when Kelly told Carrie to come home. I'ma thinking Carrie's in deep shit. And how the hell did Kelly figure it out? Sure, Carrie's not the most subtle and unobvious person in the world but I didn't think it was that obvious... or maybe Kelly knew all along. Sneaky.
person Violence
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yup, pretty damn sure Carrie using the knowledge of Kelly being her internet friend is only gonna backfire. If there's one thing I've learned from reading fics for so long is that good things rarely stay that way. But at least she's using it for the well being of her relationship. Can't hate her for wanting to fix her marriage. The flashback was sweet as hell. Makes me understand a bit more about Kelly's lack of faith in Carrie. Hope Carrie doesn't make it seem painfully obvious that she's really on the other end of that IM by doing something like that the next day. Might really make Kelly raise an eyebrow.
person Violence
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how much humor this story has. I often find myself cackling my ass off. Carrie's such a smartass but she puts her foot in her mouth hella lot and I oddly love that. Kelly's also certifiably insane, lol. She's crazy but regardless they are absolutely adorable and sweet together. The wedding flashbacks were beautiful and it makes me wonder how they could go from that to this without realizing it. Love final paragraph.
person Violence
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved that they were teasing each other through most of the chapter. And the way Ashley totally pawned her son off to Carrie the moment she was sure she wouldn't give him back, lol. That song was almost like the final nail in a coffin. So sad.
person Mo56
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is getting sooo good
person Mo56
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was adorable
person sugar
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love that kelly decided to join the tour and that they'll have their own bus. and it's so cute that she wants them to have a "normal" life. again i love the whole plot of the fic. :D can't wait for the next update!
person Violence
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! So damn happy Kelly said yes to Carrie's offer. Even better though that they get a tour bus all to themselves... and Marty. Carrie's getting the chance to prove her loyalty so i hope she doesn't fuck it up. Lmao, scarbble. really? "'So I win then?..' Carrie shouted after her." lol, could definitely see that happening. Awww, the ending was adorable. Love it.
person Violence
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha, Ashley's hilarious for telling Kelly no to the baby talk and Jason for the one night stand thing. Kelly has horrible timing. But she made up for it because her and Carrie talking about having kids together was utterly adorable. LMAO!! That whole part about breasts had me cracking up. Oh shiiiiiiiiiit. I can't help but feel as if Kelly completely overheard what Carrie and Jason were talking about. Jason's right though, Kelly would probably go bonkers and kick Carrie out.

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