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kelly don't say anything! i want things to get better

That was cute when they were trying to figure out what to name the baby. LMAO, I can't believe you took the Jeanne/Graham thing to heart. You get major awesome points for that, too cool. YEAH!!! I'm completely excited by the fact that they had sex after so long. Go get 'em girls. Awwwww, they finally said 'I love you' while sober and the ending was great. Loved the whole thing. Not that I don't already love everything you write but yeah, you get the point.

"Carrie felt like choking the older woman." Me too Carrie, me too. Damn! Kelly knew? I feel bad for Jason and I still really wanna know how he and Ashley got together and why the hell he wasn't there for her throughout her pregnancy. My heart broke a little when Kelly said she maybe she couldn't be convinced of Carrie's faithfulness. I like that Carrie's actually using her knowledge for good but I have a feeling that if Kelly ever found out she'd feel betrayed. Gah, that flashback was so fucking cute. Finally! We have the problem. and now that Carrie knows she should fire that women's ass. Woohoo! Yay for Carrie making a move and trying to fix it.

yay! carrie is totally going to win her back!

I was right! Jason's totally the babies daddy. wonder how that one came about and why the hell isn't he there with Ashley? Awww, so maybe Jeanne's not that bad. Just a royal bitch. Whoa, Jason and Jeanne don't get along either? Damn, Carrie laughed right in her face, lol. Maybe Jeanne's got a little affair going on with Graham? Probably not but it'd hilarious if it were true. I like that Carrie could defuse that Kelly bomb before it grew. i'm eagerly waiting for the next one.

Ashley!!! lololol. that girl's too funny. Jeanne is the devil. Graham is a lackey. I'm convinced. Yay, for Kelly finally stading up to her mom. Once again Ashley saves the day. woohoo! Oh Carrie... so close. Jason... Ashley? wow, so Jason either got Ashley preggers, broke her heart, or died. I wanna know why she's crying over Jason. lovely update.

"'Ashley.....you have to push...' Carrie didn't know if she really did or not, she was now quoting er scripts."

haha loved that line. and of course the little part with kelly sitting on her lap

Hahaha. That opening line was great. "you put wood in the fire and it burns" lmao. Jeanne is a bitch... can we kill her? Yes, I have noticed that we reviewers have a thing for wanting to kill people who mess with the lovelyness of Carrie/Kelly. The flashbacks were so damn cute. I squeed. I want to thank you for not torturing us, not teasing us, and not making us wait in giddy anticipation. I'm so relieved that at least one of them found out. And I loved that they were able to spend a nice afternoon together without fighting. I really love that Carrie found out though. Made my day. Practically on my knees praying that she does the right thing with this info.

Great job-I having a hard time getting my review to take for some reason. Love your writing style.

omg graham is a pig! good for kelly dumping him! now if only her and carrie could find that happy place again!! lol