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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i hate that there are moments when they seem like they're trying to improve...then they just fall back on the dysfunctional ways...more please
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really, really enjoy this story.
but i agree i wouldn't mind jeanne and graham getting killed off hehe
can't wait for the next update :)
but i agree i wouldn't mind jeanne and graham getting killed off hehe
can't wait for the next update :)
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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Shit. I got a little misty eyed during that last part. So angsty. Yeah... Jeanne and Graham need to get killed off as well. Tornado maybe? Perhaps hurricane Carrie? I love that Carrie talked a little bit about their problems even though she was wasted. hopefully, she'll make Kelly stop doubting their relationship so much.
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love their flashbacks. can't wait for more
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good! this is getting good! we want them happy!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a cute one. I loved seeing Kelly and Carrie interacting normally instead of having WWIII. Go Kelly! Sticking up for your woman for both your mom and a douchebag employee. Ashley the intermediate saves the day once again. The ending was beautiful.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is a painfully beautiful story. i don't want to see them like this...but i can't stop reading. just tell me that things get better and they really do live happily ever after? lol
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
still loving it. can't wait for the next one :)
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am very intrigued by your fan fic. I think you are off to a really great start. I think there is so much you can do with this story & I can't wait to see what direction that you take it...I think it is realy cute that they are kinda cheating on each other with each other-Classic...PLEASE continue soon...
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was really heart tugging. I feel so, so bad for Carrie. Then again I feel for Kelly too. But really it's both of their faults and neither one of them is even attempting to reach out. Carrie's timid and Kelly's angry. If Carrie and Kelly ever find out who's really on the other end of that IM it'd be a mircale. Still love this though, I just hope you don't break them up... too much.