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by writer101

person Violence
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LADIES!!! What the fuck're you thinking!? First to Carrie for making Kelly chose between her father and Carrie because that's half a step away from ridiculous. Second to Kelly for not maning up and making her father come back to reality to see that Carrie is still very much so her wife. Third because her father's pretty much a bastard. And forth is a smack upside the head to Carrie for walking out and sending them spiraling back to square one. She could have just dragged Kelly out of the house as well and it would have been better. And fifth is a smack upside Kelly's head for not seeing how much ass it sucks for Carrie to just be there and for making her feel like nothing. Now they need is to be locked in a room and talk it out. But this chapter was a very good read. I was open mouthed the whole time.
person greens28
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great job-seems like Carrie's album has been tanked. Good thing in the real world that they are both selling millions of albums each. Anyway, I hope that Kelly's dad is going to really try to make amends w/ Kelly & accept Carrie. Great job-as always.
person Violence
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn Carrie. Way to get your woman. Lolol, Ashley. Ahh, I love when writers insert stuff from reality into fics. Not to mention that with the frequency Kelly takes her inears out she must really love Carrie. It's really cute too.
person ctallent
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very sweet chapter... these two are so in love
person ctallent
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol great update.. carrie's jealousy is hilarious....
person ctallent
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, go kelly.... i had a feeling that was what noah was thinking... funny chapter... thanks for the updates
person Violence
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, that conversation with Noah wasn't weird at all. Wonder why he wants to stay with Kelly/Carrie instead of going home. More than meets that eye?
person greens28
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow-that was great & very funny. I loved Carrie's pout & jealousy over Mickey Mouse...just too precious & cute. I love the idea of them starting a family together & the Disney trip is a good start for them. They are slowly putting the realtionship back together. Graet job. More soon, please???
person ctallent
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i so love all your stories thanks for updating them.... lol, carrie is so funny being all jealous of mickey.... and noah rubbing it in lol....
person Violence
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I totally laughed at the 'My life would suck without you too' comment. Hmmm, I kinda love that they sorted everything out too. Hahah, the Ashley/Kelly moments never fail to awe me and make me laugh.

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