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by writer101

person ctallent
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol ahsley is hilarious... very sweet chapter... thanks for updating these...
person Violence
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ROFL. "KELLY FIRE." Oh and her response was ten times funnier. 'Come get me when it reaches the door.' A true genius. See... I never understood the love of those damn books. 'Woo... vampires' was my reaction, nothin special. But god, I agree on the taken over the women of america thing! It's spooky. Lol at Carrie getting jealous and pouting over Edward. Damn, Kelly really knows how to get her woman, haha. Way to go ladies.
person ctallent
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha that was a funny and sweet chapter....those two are so cute.
person ctallent
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love how kelly took carrie's side with alyssa... lol at bringing jacob along on their trip....im sure kelly is the best aunt
person Violence
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn, look at Kelly go, defending her woman against her sister and all. Lol, Ashley's so clever. She just suckered Kelly into taking him so she wouldn't have to deal with the crying. 'Uncross your fingers and say that again.........' I love that Carrie knows exactly what she's doing even when she can't see her doing it. 'Maybe we can train Noah to look after him?..........' Hahahahahah, that's a damn good idea.
person Violence
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, right, church'll make 'em behave. I guess the mystery of what year it is has just been solved, lol. Love that they followed through on the whole sppoiling each other thing. Cracked up at the last section with Jeanne and Carrie's inability to stop talking about some woman's turkey hat.
person ctallent
schedule April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, this was funny.... jeanne was hilarious.... thanks for updating these.
person Violence
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I love how Kelly's family pretty much hates Carrie and Carrie hates them right back. Awwww, look at Jeanne being all nice and caring to Carrie. And all it took was being locked on a bus together and losing a few pints of blood. Jason and Carrie are like best buds, it's nice to know at least one of the Clarkson's like her. The last two parts with Noah/Carrie and Kelly/Carrie were amazing. So adorable.
person ctallent
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very cute update... the ending was hilarious...
person greens28
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad that they talked things out this time instead of shutting each other out. I am glad that Carrie understands why Kelly wants to spoil the kids. I think it a great idea that the spoil each other first..but Carrie had a great idea about buying presents for kids that can't afford them-that will make Kelly so happy to give something back to kids who have very little , or nothing at all at Christmas. Fantastic update. More soon. Please?

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