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by writer101

person ctallent
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very sweet, maybe jeanne has seen the light and is gonna give carrie a chance... jason thinks so much of carrie, that is cute.... great update.
person ctallent
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww very cute ending.... glad to see kelly didnt stay mad at carrie too long... thanks for updating....
person Violence
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, lover's quarrel? I was pretty much sputtering 'wtf is going on?' the whole time. Seriously, they fought over gifts/money... on kids? Jesus, I know my parents would have been delighted to be charity cases at christmas time and I would've told my sisters to suck it up. But Carrie brought it upon herself... almost. They still have so much tension to work through that arguments pretty much send them back to square one. Oi. Where's Ashley with a lock and a padded room when you need them?
person ctallent
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
no no no, they were doing so good ......
person Violence
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. You girls go get 'em. Wouldn't mind reading that every day, lol.
person ctallent
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very very good update... good to see them happy.... thanks
person Violence
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahah. Kelly locked their asses in. Gotta marvel at Carrie's strength though, girl broke the handle off with a quickness. I just couldn't take this seriously at any rate, unfortunately. I was laughing and chuckling the whole time at Jeanne as well as the Jeanne/Carrie interaction. 'im going to die.....with you here ......and your going to sit and watch.....' I had a tear in my eye by the time I finished that sentence. Liked the tell me a story bit. It was nice to see that they actually could bond over something, damn good thing it was Kelly too. loled at Kelly automatically thinking Jeanne did something to her. The ending was really cute.
person ctallent
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww that was a sweet flashback.... thanks for the update keep em coming lol
person ctallent
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great update, funny and sweet....thanks
person Violence
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Flashback was so effin cute. Kelly's so evil but I love that she did it. Carrie's extreme shyness/awkwardness always makes me raise an eyebrow. Love that Kelly was able to snap her out of it. And woohoo to Kelly basically telling Jeanne to suck it. Nice.

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