AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for night time talks

by writer101

person ctallent
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great update, very sweet. go kelly for putting jeanne in her place....keep em coming
person Violence
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this update because there wasn't so much going on. It was mainly Jeanne being quiet and Kelly/Carrie talking, two very entertaining things. Lol at watching over 60's naked on the beach because you know that's what dreams are made of, haha. The talk of kids was beautiful, just beautiful.
person greens28
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really do love all your fics & they are all fantastic-But I think this one is my FAV. Man, the parents walking in on them was funny as hell. I am glad that Carrie finally had the chance to set Kelly's mom straight(no pun meant). I am also glad that Kelly gave carrie the space to talk to her mother & didn't try to stop here..but let her have her say. I think they are going in the right direction. Awesome job..I am loving it & can't wait for an update. Also, liked the end..Carrie gave it a try & Kelly said no chance in hell...I am sure Kelly's mom would have had an heart attack if she heard them having sex again.
person ctallent
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great update, i love this story so much...i am so glad they are trying to work things out...jeanne needs to leave....update soon
person Violence
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's gotta be the worst turn off ever as well being extremely embarassing. I was hoping they'd be able to finish but alas my hopes were crushed and shattered into a million tiny pieces by none other than Jeanne, lol. Thanks lady. And lol at Carole getting in on some of the Jeanne insulting action. If I was Carrie I'd call her a hella lot worse things than just a stupid old woman. Sometimes I still can't help but stare at the screen in amazement that Jeanne hasn't figured out/accepted that her daughter is very, very gay and in love. Makes me wonder how she ever made it through that wedding. Unless she wasn't there which would make sense why she was forced to forever hold her peace. Flashback suggestion, maybe?
person Violence
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The first part of this was great with Kelly and Ashley trying to out do each other, Jason stuffing his face, and Ashley, period. It's chapters like these that make me feel like the update, sad and sweet. Good things are happening but the underlying tone is bittersweet. Yea, Kelly what're you're true feelings? ''It's there baby......try looking harder..........' Lol, defintely something she would say. woohoo! Date. Progress. Yes.
person ctallent
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank you thank you thank you... great updates, very sweet...loving it..
person ctallent
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please please tell you are not done with these stories. pleeeeease update soooon..
person Violence
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't say anything about the beginning that hasn't already been said. It was so cute and yet heart breaking at the same time because Carrie's so scared of fucking up again. I completely laughed my ass off at Jason and Ashley having sex on the bus where Kelly and Carrie can very clearly hear them. 'Their animals......' That line got me laughing even more. But I love how Carrie distracted her. Especially with a memory that great and aww worthy. I hope that when Kelly wakes up and Jason and Ashley are done they can do out there and bust on them. Revenge.
person Violence
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou. You saved my sanity, lol. Damn, had Carrie actually let Amy on the bus I would have gone batshit and bitched about it. But thank god, Carrie's common sense kicked in at the last minute. AND Kelly successfully defended/reined in her woman. Good thing Kelly knocked that bitch down about 50 notches or so. Lmao, at Carrie messig with Ashley. Too funny. Carrie should get one free slap upside the head from Ashley for being oblivious. Super hapy that they finally talked about it and that Kelly stayed. And as your endings usually are, that was cute.

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?