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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think that Carrie got to Kelly this time with her actions & I loved that kelly showed up at the hotel to prove to Carrie that she really does care. I really do love this fic. I still think that Kelly blames Carrie for most of their problems when they are really equally to blame-but she is starting to come around. Great job.Update agian soon. Please?
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was sweet as hell that Jason would come and visit Carrie. I loled at Jason trying to break Kelly and Carrie by using Graham. But damn did Kelly hurt the hell outta Carrie by not even claiming them as a serious couple, even i felt the pain on that one. Both of those girls really need to swallow their pride and show up 'cause I'm starting to agree with Jason and Ashley. They is pathetic. And it was also extremely sweet that Kelly sent Carrie some of that chili. I see improvement.
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a-d-o-r-a-b-l-e. Seriously, the way you write, I can acually happening in my mind. I hope Kelly goes on tour with Carrie, or surprises her in some way:):). Jason is halarious, so protective, and sometimes so stupid...trying to break Kelly and Carrie up...idiot.haha!! You know I used to think Graham was hot when ever since I saw him opening on Kelly's tour, but not so much anymore, I want to smack that smirk off his face. haha. Great job:D:D
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet hell. That ending was beautiful. Terribly sad as well. Carrie's parents were hilarious though. 'Is this Jeanne's fault....cause I promise i'll take that woman out......' I laughed at that for quite a while. That'd be hilarious if someone stuck them in a room and let 'em duke it out. laughed again when Stephen asked both girls if he had to come up there and bang their heads together. I wish Carrie would have been the one to cave first instead of Kelly but it was still awesome that they "talked."
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know Ive never commented but I do love both of your stories!!! They are halarious/sad/happy/everything all together!!! In basic words they rock!!:D:D
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love me some Ashley insight. I can only hope that Carrie finds a way to prove that she's still very much in love with Kelly soon. Otherwise everyone's screwed. Oh my god, I laughed so hard at the part where Kelly told off Jeanne. I was shocked too, never thought she'd actually do it. Even more shocked Jeanne actually ate that breakfast, lol. Go Kelly. "Guess we'll just have to wait and see......" And impatiently might I add.
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February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update. I am so glad that Kelly told her mom off at breakfast...I just wish she would have done it in front of Carrie...but baby steps are still great. I loved the plate throwing...that was funny. I am loving this. I can't wait to read the next update.
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February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was oddly sweet in a sad way. Like the flashbacks were all happy and then the present was dismal. Nice contrast. I'm really happy Kelly's not completely hating on Carrie. I'm dreading the moment when Jeanne finds out. Jeanne rubbing it in her face won't make Kelly's decision making skills as better.
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Kelly is really upset with Carrie & she should be-but they both have made mistakes. Carrie didn't know that the whole time it was kelly that she was cahtting to on-line. Kelly makes things seem like they are all Carrie's fault---but Kelly is always accussing Carrie of cheating...when she isn't & her mom is always ragging on Carrie-Kelly needs to put her mom in her place & not let het talk to her wife that away. Can't wait to read more. Awesome job!!!!
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thankfully I came prepared to read with the worst case scenario in mind. And it happened, Kelly kicked Carrie's ass outta there. But at least she said she'd call, that gives me some hope. This update was seriously really fuckin sad. And the end, aw man was that a killer. I'm happy Kelly figured it out though and didn't completely condem Carrie. Shows she's not totally off her rocker. Next couple of updates should be interesting. wonder what Ashley'll think, lol.