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for Baby Can I Hold You

by writer101

person Violence
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No. No. No. No. Noooooo. Not Carrie! If that was Paul someone had better damn well be whippin out a switchblade and gettin ready to rumble in the next chapter. If it was some whiney homophobic bitch than a bus going at least 70 mph should be involved. I've grown a strange attachment to Carrie over the course of time and when they damage the goods I always want someone's ass kicked. Oops. Either way it blows that Carrie's taking the heat and I'm really pleased that Kelly never actually listened to her and just kept on pushing until she found out what was wrong. Nice stuff.
person ctallent
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh, i knew it....it was paul wasnt it... hopefully he gets hit by a truck....lol great update.
person Violence
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was cute how Carrie did as Elle requested. That interviewer was a complete asshole. I hope he gets trampled over... by cows. "as she reahced for the door handle"!? What is that? That makes it sound like someone's waiting behind it to maime her.
person ctallent
schedule May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor carrie, i pray that is not paul at that door.. and that he doesnt find kelly before carrie gets home... sweet how carrie patted her stomach for elle...
person Violence
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
They're so cute! Taking care of and looking after each other. And that's really all I can say.
person Violence
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'Fine..i ate the chalk.' I could not stop laughing during the whole chalk part. It was so freaking cute too. And I loved that both of them were all ready to spoil the hell outta Elle before Carrie figured out she had pulled one over on them. Such a smart kid. Laughed even harder when Carrie decided to take her back to school. Good parental moment.
person Violence
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. what a whiny bitch. So your daughter's happy, gay, and has a girlfriend, daughter, and son who love her no matter what. Wow, that must be a real tragedy for Carole to endure. But she almost redeemed herself at the end for acknowledging it, I give her credit for that.
person greens28
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW Very intense w/ the social worker. Little Elle is a delight..I love how U write her-so sweet & innoncent & very funny. I loved how Kelly & Carrie's mom's bonded-they all hate Jason's new girlfriend-very funny.
person sugar
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww that was really sweet :')
person Violence
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES. Thank you Ashley for realizing the stupidity and getting Carrie to fix it. And thank you Carrie for explaining. Carrie needs to confront her mom about putting all these crazy ideas in Kelly's head about her not being faithful/loyal. The woman really must not know her daughter too well if she never even had an inkling on an idea that it's been Kelly the whole time. The whole update was beautiful really.

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