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for Baby Can I Hold You

by writer101

person ctallent
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
no no no, things were just starting to get good between them....
person ctallent
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay, its about time.... go carrie
person ctallent
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very sweet, things are looking good for them now.... hopefully paul stays away for good.....
person Violence
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'The only time you call is when it's bad news.Never think of calling and inviting me to Sunday lunch?' Haha, that's so true. ROFL, Kelly's blue balling Carrie! That was hilarious. I love that Jason is never taken seriously especially when Carrie calls him 'big guy.' Poor guy needs to find some male friends.
person ctallent
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh man, poor carrie... glad jason is there to protect them...
person greens28
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is just so interesting. I really am enjoying it more & more with each chapter. They sure do have a smart 4-year old..Too bad she has such a rotten dad...but 2 moms will work just fine. Awesome update.
person ctallent
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol the ending was hilarious, kelly knows she has carrie right where she wants her... hopefully paul wont find them... elle is so cute
person Violence
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, honestly my first thought after reading this was 'THERE'S A BOMB IN THE BAG. RUN. FLEE!' But then I realized that that would be retarded. Man, Paul's such a douchebag. I really hope he gets run over by a semi.
person ctallent
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what the heck is this crazy woman leaving her baby.....
person Violence
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahah, at them attempting to ignore Elle but failing. Oh damn, I don't think this is going to end well at all. But would Paul really be that smart? And how the fuck did that woman find the house? I loved that moment of Kelly and Carrie fighting over who would stay and who would go. That protectiveness is cute. The Paul thing is just strange though.

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