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Elle is a fucking genius. So cute how she knew Carrie would eventually cave and how she didn't want Carrie to leave. Heart warming. damn, almost forgot that Kelly was still stuck in 02/03. Lmaoed at the last two lines.

awww sweet update, thanks.... it is going great

whew. I actually thought some hardcore shit was gonna go down for a minute there. I'm glad they acknowledged their stupidity, lol. The ending was the heart stealer though. I love that Carrie wants to someday marry Kelly and make a family with Elle as hers. Adorable.

oh thank god carrie found her time... great update, cant wait to see where this goes...

Damn, mate. Feeling in an angsty writing mood lately? lol. Again the moronic Carrie strikes again. Someone should purchase her a muzzle or an electric shock collar that goes off whenever she goes near alcohol. I also did one of the loudest, hardest facepalms ever. What. the. fuck? The first reason being that I wanna throttle Carrie for getting so out of control. Second to Kelly for not saying anything. And the third goes to Paul because I don't know his intentions. I've got this sense of severe dread running through me. Odd. This chapter left me with my jaw dropped in disbelief.

My thoughts: oh. fuck. I was all happy about them getting away by themselves and then the ice breaker came. Now would be a great time for Kelly to have a flashback and sucker punch him. I knew he'd be back eventually but not while she's still memory challenged. Can only imagine Carrie's reaction if she ever sees him.

oh no no paul, hope carrie gets there in time. please dont let them get hurt......no no no

Just read last 2 updates & they wee both Awesome. Kelly's little girl is just to cute...Ainte carrie 7 Momma kiss now..taht was a great line & the one about her telling the Postman that they kiss now also..Too funny. Great stuff. Keep it coming.

Carrie's parents must be insane if they think that Kelly's actually gonna go running back to her husband after she remembers. I love that Carrie defended her intentions. Oh yea, rofl at the end of the last chapter where Elle bluntly came out and said that Kelly and Carrie kiss as well as when she told the postman. Cute, hilarious, and embarrassing. The perfect child. Thank you Kelly for reassuring Carrie. She needed it.

I have once again managed to laugh my way through a chapter. Hahahah, Elle's such a smartass. Love that Carrie's gonna make the would be garden into a play area. I can see Carrie's regreting inviting Kelly's family over now, lol. Listening to your relatives have sex in your house has gotta be just a tad bit disturbing. Lmao, I love how as soon as they mention hotel Ashley and Jason come a running.