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for Baby Can I Hold You

by writer101

person ctallent
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh man great chapter....please please update these stories.....
person Violence
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was cute how Kelly and Jeanne were bitching/fighting while Carrie just sat helpless under the covers. Family reunion!? Oh, those are never good. When Kelly's family gets there I am so expecting a huge amount of humor to arise from it. I like that Jeanne's totally cool with Kelly and Carrie dating. Then again it's not like it could get much worse after Paul. Speaking of which KC needs a divorce, lol. 'Elle told me.....Mommy and Auntie Carrie kiss.' So cute! The ending was even better with Carrie and Elle in the bed together.
person Violence
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I can really comment on much without being too repetitive but holy damn was that insanely cute. From the date to Kelly being nervous to the tree. There was nothing I could possibly not like about this chapter.
person greens28
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was one of my fav updates from this story. It was so funny & touching. I love the banter between Kelly and her mom & Carrie giving the little wave from under the covers-so cute. Elle is just a handful...but so cute and smart. Love it.
person greens28
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Carrie is doing everything right here.. What no Drama in the latest update? Or will that be when they go on their date? I am sure you got something sneaky that will leave us wanting more in the next update. I did love this one also-it was fun & they are so cute toghter. Awesome job!!!

P.s. Wasn't Carrie awesome on AI??? Can't wait to see her win her first ACM EOTY award!!!!
person Violence
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Date night. Can't wait to see what Carrie's got up her sleeve.
person greens28
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice update.. I am glad that Carrie is standing by Kelly. It is good to see them really opening up & being honest with each other. Keep going-good job!!
person Violence
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'It's not funny....Grandma killed Bambi.' Oh my god, you have no idea just how hard i laughed at that. Hahah, loved how Jason saluted Jeanne the drill sergeant. The last couple of lines about Ashley and winking and happiness were awesome.
person Violence
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you. So damn relieved Kelly didn't just bolt and instead questioned Elle about it. That little girl is totally heaven sent now. That's what's so wonderful about innocence. And the truth is out. Yay! It would have sucked if you had dragged that out for a couple chapters, lol. The next morning's still gonna be pretty interesting.
person greens28
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet. i'm so glad theat Ellie told Kelly the truth..maybe her real memories will start to come back. Great job.

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