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yay, perfect update... now maybe kelly will beat clives ass.... hope things start to look up for them...thanks for the update

Oh Carrie. You are so fucked my girl. Moron. Bring on the heartbreak. Kelly's gonna feel hurt and betrayed, then proceed to get pissed and/or freak out. The beginning was fucking hilarious though. Yay for the Ashley teasing of Kelly.

And in the same instant my hopes and dreams come crashing down. I like that though, story can't always be all sushine and gumdrops, gotta build the suspense and the drama, not to mention the stupidity within the characters that's become almost like a trademark of fanfic. It always works though. Because Kelly just made one huge fucking mistake. Once an asshole always an asshole. Carrie's just wallowing right now and I would be to if I was being tugged around and given as many mixed signals as she's recieved. Carrie and drinking; not so pleasant history? But idiot of the day easily goes to Kelly this time. Girl left me utterly flabbgasted.

Just had a chance to catch up & read the last 2 chapters. Things are moving along nicely. U are doing a great job-I loved that Carrie is taking up for Kelly against Nathan.

Lol. I spoke too soon. Nathan is an asshole. I love that Kelly let Carrie take her in and comfort her. This version of Jason needs a smack in the back of the head. So dense and in denial. Sigh. Glad that Ashley's at least sorta objective. What I really, really loved about this was that Carrie went after Nathan and attacked his ass, even after Kelly told her not to. Something tells me Kelly's not as pleased about that as I am.

I'm trying really, really hard to hate Nathan but I can't because the guy is completely innocent in all this. And I'll feel bad for him, unless he turns out to be an asshole, because he'll be falling for Kelly while she's stuck on Carrie. I must admit I am digging the idea of making Carrie insanely jealous just to push her to the edge and see if she tells Kelly the truth or not. On the other hand I don't like seeing Carrie get depressed, angry, and sad because she let her girl go for what I don't know. Judging by the ending and the talk of forgeting, me thinks she's either gonna sleep with him or freak out.

For the most part I agree with what greens said. Kelly's gonna be distracting herself with Nathan while trying to get over Carrie. Wow, Kelly's being so cold to Carrie. I feel bad for Carrie 'cause she thought they were finally gonna work on it but all Kelly did was run and give Carrie the cold shoulder. Wonder how long that's going to last when they go on tour. I do hope to find out about that agreement soon though. And Clive's still one creepy mofo, lol.

What the fuck? That's the only thing I can really think right now. Nothing makes sense. It was sweet of Carrie to wanna make breakfast for Kelly, too bad her ass gonna be long gone by the time she gets back. So the thing that really stumped me was Clive showing up... again. He seriously creeps me the fuck out with that showing up in Carrie's bedroom thing... sexual harrasment anyone? And the fact that he's being a huge douche only makes it worse. Yeah, and with the way Clive was talking it made me think that he's making Carrie have a forced affair with him. That kind of idea has the power to make me laugh, wince, and gag all at the same time. But dammit, I wanna know what that agreement is. And why Carrie is hell bent on not letting Kelly know?

Damn, Clive is all kind of stalker crazy. Carrie need to hire security & get those locks changed. It is all kinds of wrong for him to be coming & going in her house. Can we all so creepy. Nice update though...Kelly is gonna date Nathan as a buffer & rub it all in Carrie's face. Her text back to Carrie was just way harsh. Kelly will feel like a jackass when she finds out the reason why Carrie did what she did about the Clive situation. can't wait for more tomorrow!! Please?

Holy shit. That was not what I expected at all. But damn am I glad it happened. I love how you made that little distiction about how Kelly wouldn't be doing this if she didn't want to. Smart move. Now I don't really know what to think but I feel that Jason's plan is going to either blow up in his face or Kelly will attempt to date him just to get her mind off Carrie.