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for Right Kind Of Wrong

by writer101

person Violence
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry. I go through bouts of laziness. Carrie's parents are fucking crazy. I'll never understand how people can be so closed minded and treat their kids like that. But damn did Kelly's mom just pwn her. LOL at Paula having the attention span of a goldfish. Only Carrie would claim to be straight and yet hide from her sister just to call Kelly. Someone's got a huge crush. I like that Simon's scared of Ashley.
person ctallent
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ah that was cute, carrie is so into kelly... thanks for the updates i was worried there for a while lol
person greens28
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SO, GLAD TO SEE AN UPDATE. I AM STARTING TO LOVE THIS FIC MORE & MORE W/ EVERY CHAPTER. Oops sorry about all the caps-didn't mean to. Anyway, great job. I am glad that Carrie gave Kelly her diary-it will help Kelly to undersatnd her better.
person Violence
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I dunno what happen to my last review of this fic but I so had that Ashley looking at the diary thing pegged. Rofl, "Did you tuck her in?" I love that. Kelly is sooooo smitten.
person ctallent
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, poor kelly, she's got it bad hopefully carrie will come around soon..
person ctallent
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, poor kelly... these two are driving me crazy... ashley is so hilarious
person Violence
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what the fuck is in that box? A doll version of Carrie for Kelly to play with when she's not around? (hah, I made myself laugh with that one) Perhaps a video or some picture or a key or a letter or a big box of nothing? I'm shocked Ashley didn't tell her to shake it. Special date, huh? The day they met or hell, someone's birthday. Lmao, I completely love the Kelly/Ashley friendship. BFF's 4 life.
person Violence
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, Paula and Randy, the minions. Oooo, Carrie. Leaving Kelly presents? I'm sure she'll be pleased if it's really you in a box. Or maybe it's something dirty... you never know with those brain washed girls. Carrie's totally spoiling Kelly... the doting girlfriend. Hahahah, Kelly's so whipped.
person Violence
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, a bell. I don't think that'd help. Damn Carrie, she didn't say stip but I don't think she minded anyway. I knew Kelly wouldn't be sticking it out for more than a season. I can't help but think that Kelly's definitely gonna fuck up her chances, only if she gets caught though. Simon sees it, I see it, why does Kelly not see it? Maybe it has something to do with that weak 'she's straight' argument.
person Violence
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maybe Carrie would like to be that lesbian action for Kelly. Oh yeah, Kelly's packed her bags and moved straight into I've got it bad land.

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