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for Right Kind Of Wrong

by writer101

person Violence
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ryan better be wary of Kelly 'cause if he's dead Dunkleman's back, lol. "but seriously I do tend to attract the crazy." I can't help but think we constitute as some of those crazies. Ashley deserves an award for her hilariousness. Her interaction with almost anyone makes me bust a gut. Awww, see Kelly, Carrie doesn't disappoint. In fact she one upped you. I'm completely sold on the idea that now that Carrie has Kelly all alone she's going to seduce her.
person Violence
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yup. Kelly's a smitten goner. But the thing with Simon, Randy, and Paula was confusing as hell. I didn't get it at all. The last line of this was hilarious though.
person greens28
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yep...Kelly's realy got it bad..U know it's real love when U hold a girls hair for her while she is throwing up. Great job. Poor Kelly is getting so many mixed signals from Carrie..but I think that Carrie is really falling for her..she is just scared. Great job.
person ctallent
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, poor kelly hopefully this will work....
person Violence
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kel-ly! What the hell're you doin? Teasing will get you nowhere... unless Carrie wants to be tempted. 'I didn't know you had breasts...............' I started rolling on the floor with that line. Simon's so witty. He was great throughout the whole thing.
person Mo56
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapter! i seriously love love love this story!!! the teasing that carrie does to kelly is freakin hilarious!...not to mention sexy as hell. poor kelly, she'll get hers soon enough i hope!--and by hers i mean miss carrie underwood!! keep up the fantastic work. oh and one more thing, i love how you update all your stories like everyday! totally puts me in a good mood when i head to work. thanks again!
person ctallent
schedule May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
man carrie just make your move already... poor kelly, i hope simon doesnt know about them...
person Violence
schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I nearly pissed myself laughing at the chapter before this. Jeanne and Ashley were insane together. lol, oh yeah. Carrie just confirmed it. She's uber gay and has it bad for Kelly. But Carrie's actions are confusing as hell. Leaves me in a pool of huh.
person greens28
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I 've liked the story from the start...but I was always a little skeptical about going the direction of Carrie being so naive & believing that a doctor can ungay a person. I will admit that I am coming around & I'm really starting to enjoy the fic more..I can totally tell what U are tring to accomplish. Small town girl...trying to do right by what ever one in her family is telling her to be...but by meeting Kelly she might be abble to make her own decesions & stand on her own for the first time. Great job!!!!
person ctallent
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh, hopefully carrie tells kelly she wants her... lol

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