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for Right Kind Of Wrong

by writer101

person Violence
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved that opening paragraph. Girl is boardering on obessive. Rofl, at Emma making a pass at Ashley and at Jason marrying some random chick in vegas. Also loved the explaination of why she couldn't live without Ashley. I laughed so hard when Ashley called Simon Sid. Annie and Sid. Too funny.
person Violence
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was sympathizing with Emma until the last bit because she just came off as irritating the whole time. haha, I agree. Kelly is screwed up.
person Violence
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't stop laughing after the whole Annie thing. Hell, I'm still giggling about it. Especially this line "England did sound like a good idea but I knew Annie would hate it, just as much as she would hate her new name." Just for the fact that Kelly called her Annie in her head. Aw, Kelly's a little heart breaker. Hope she at least calls Emma back or something. It's not nice to just leave a girl hanging or lead her on. Can't wait to see just how much this Carrie infatuation has manifested.
person greens28
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just read Ch 5-this fic is moving along quite nicely. Awesome job.
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love that Ashley can see right through Kelly. And their banter was really cute and funny too. I really doubt Kelly's going to be able to stay away from Carrie once the show really kicks off. The last paragraph of the second chapter is one I really love. I love the comparison made between the girls. And the third chapter, oh lord, I was laughing so hard at the beginning. Ashley's excuse for Kel was great and she's right, Kelly shouldn't avoid this other girl even though Carrie's now in the picture. The "bitch" comment, that's priceless. I love how Simon was actually being nice for once and gave Kelly a way to get Carrie's audition. Great updates, cannot wait for more.
person Violence
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, dear Kelly's got commintment issues. Love that Simon teases Kelly and that he told her how to get the tapes. See? He's a nice guy.
person greens28
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This one is starting to get better & better with each chapter. I like the little comments between Kelly/Simon ( as long as he doesn't turn on her & blackmail's her). Anyway, Great job..More awesome reading to do....Thanks to U. Love it!!!
person greens28
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As Randy would say..."You blew it out the box, dog". Great start-I am loving this take on Carrie/ Kelly fic. It is different & has my interst 100%. Keep going-you are on to something.
person Violence
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, I love it when Ashley teases Kelly. Yeah right, don't mess with the contestants. We'll see how long that one lasts. And at the rate Kelly's going she's gonna be all over Carrie the next time she sees her.
person Violence
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are insane. Anyone with four stories at the same time is insane. I remember when the story count here was 2. But uh, I'm definitely not complaining. 'Well find a lawyer and sue your singing teacher' lmao. Simon said something similar to this during the first season auditions and it had me laughing pretty hard. I love how Kelly's already gay... and Simon knows it, lol. Quite funny how he makes the contestants tell them their darkest secrets, I could see that happening. Kelly should defintely team up with Simon and just crush all these peoples hopes and dreams. They deserve it. Hahah, she got infatuated at first sight. "The next few minutes went by in a blur, Simon spoke, Randy called her dog and Paula tried to talk over Simon but all I could do was stare at her." What an accurate description. The fact that this is in first person only makes it better. Can't wait to see where you take this little bundle of joy.

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