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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I bow to your ability to have four fics going at once, that really takes skill. And you've definitely got it. I love the premise of this, it's a really interesting twist. I am also loving the first person point of view, I really think it will add a bunch to the fic, plus it helps capture what is being described. The first sentence just grabbed my attention and pulled me in, as the rest of the paragraph had me laughing at the image created. The audition before Carrie's had me laughing so hard at the dialogue, especially at the "Well find a lawyer and sue your singing teacher" bit. I too love the fact that Kelly's already gay, it adds some great teasing with Simon as you've shown already. I really love this line too: "There was no crazy vibe from her at all" and just how Kelly's already enamored with Carrie. Honestly, I cannot wait for the next update to see where you take this.