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for So Cold

by willjames52

person annon
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad that you updated!! this story has definitely been missed, so thank you for continuing to write :) i really love how carrie is getting bolder each chapter. i'm really excited for their conversation about carrie calling kelly her girlfriend. and jeanne. oh jeanne.. haha as great as it is that she is supportive, hopefully her stay will be short.. *wink* *wink* thanks again for the great update :)
person ctallent
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow great update, cant wait for the next one...things are getting really heated between the girls now....jeanne just had to mess it up huh, hahaha...keep up the good work
person Lanerzzz
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I'm dying for an update!
person ctallent
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please please update sooon....miss your story
person ctallent
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great update, thank you...ashley just needs to chill and let kelly be an adult....hopefully she wont scare carrie off, you can tell these two care very much for each other...
person sueage
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i seriously seriously loooove this story. i totally check this site like every day hoping for an update and get like giddy fucking excited when there is one. to be honest, i wasn't sure if i was the biggest fan of all the extra narration describing everything that each girl was thinking and/or feeling at the time because i tend to be a bigger fan of fics that kinda show what is going on with the characters based on dialogue or even thoughts rather than just being told where there heads are at. but now that you have gotten more into the story, i am actually really enjoying that about your fic. it's totally different than most of the dialogue-driven fics i have read and i like it a lot for how different it is in that way. i think you are doing a fantastic job showing all of the insecurity and uncertainty that they have. i feel like there has been even more of that in this fic than in a lot of others cuz even though they were friends before they crossed that line to something more...they werent like majorly close to where they both just completely understand each other and are at that place where they can tell each other everything or not even be afraid of what the other is going to think about them or about what they are doing. and i think that fact for sure brings out the insecurity and confusion and overthinking and all that jazz that they are both doing lots of in this fic so far. and you are doing a great job with it. also, they are pretty freakin adorable during the times that they don't think about anything and just go with with they want. so yeah...i am lovin this like mad and cannot wait for the next chapter.
person ctallent
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loving this story sooooo much....glad to see carrie is starting to feel alot more comfortable around kelly....thanks for the update, cant wait for the next one....
person Lanerzzz
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I've never reviewed this story, but I've been reading it since it started. And it's so funny because I was literally just reading all of it again this weekend and I was so stoked to see a new update. It was flawless as usual.
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so i gotta say, that i am seriously, seriously loving this fic right now. things have just progressed so perfectly between them, and you're doing such a great job with the writing. i can't wait for the next part of this chapter.
person Anon
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww that was so cute. I am glad that things between Kelly and Carrie are good. I hope Carrie will get comfortable enough to tell her friends soon. I like that they are thinking about the other's feelings when things happen it shows how much they care about one another.

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