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please please please udate...i miss your story

i freakin loove this fic, but i am always super behind commenting on it. i really loved it when carrie dragged kelly back upstairs and out of sight so that she could kiss her one last time before she headed to the studio. i am totally a fan of how she is just pretty much going for it cuz she knows that being around and with kelly and making her smile and kissing her is like the only thing she wants to do right now.....i just love that she's not hesitating like at all. i also thought it was great how she wanted to them to go out on a date together and i was pretty much in love with carrie looking around to see if anyone was watching and reaching to hold kelly's hand and how she didnt want to let it go when they got to the car and how she immediately reached to take kelly's hand once they were in the car, too. super freakin cute. lovin where you are taking this and cant't wait for more for sure

great, great update. i loved how cute they were being on the walk to the car and drive home from their date. like i said before, kelly's patience and going slow is such great build up. i thought it was interesting how carrie is more hesitant to talk about carrie with tommy than matt, yet matt is oblivious and tommy see what is going on. i'm curious when they all go out if it will be figured out. oh, carrie with the gun? classic lol love your writing. please update soon :)

oh my gosh, these two are so cute....great update, love love love this story....poor carrie almost shot kelly, how sweet of kelly to try and cook dinner lol.... cant wait for the hot steamy moments ahead...please update soon....

love this fic so, so much. great job on the last chapter. i love how kelly is taking it slowly and understands that carrie is going to need some time to sort everything out. oh, that's something i love about this story, how carrie is going through the whole process as she's falling for kelly. love it, love it, love it. please update soon.

oh wow, go carrie... great update, i cant wait for the next one...i am loving thise story...

Still loving it. I really hope that they have a nice long talk to discuss it though and not just get caught up in kissing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

sooo...i def wasn't expecting that chapter to end like that...but it was cute and sweet and kinda innocent-feeling, too. i think you are doing a great job with Carrie's confusion and the kinda internal torment she has been putting herself through trying to figure out what she feels for Kelly. and how they both kinda were more nervous to be around each other while they watched the movie and Kelly worrying about leaning on Carrie and Carrie getting all tense about it at first but then tentatively putting her arm around Kelly at first and gradually holding her more firmly...well done. felt pretty damn realistic. and as soon as she said Kelly's name I just kinda had a feeling she was gonna move in to kiss her, even though I was kinda surprised she did at the same time. but really, the only way to actually find out what you're feeling for someone when you notice your feelings change is to kinda just go for it, so rock on that she did. ballsy for sure. and i looooved the detail that Carrie was caught up in the lingering feeling of Kelly's lips against hers. and i also thought that Carrie explaining that she just wanted to be closer to Kelly was probably pretty spot on for exactly how she was feeling...she can't really explain it or figure it out, she just knows she wants to be closer. i was a big fan of the "'I wanted to be closer to you'...pause, smile, hand behind neck..."I want to be closer to you'" part, too. hot. i also thought it was rad that even though Kelly didn't kiss her back at first, that Carrie persisted and closed her eyes and kept giving Kelly soft kisses until the other girl kissed her back. so yeah, i haven't commented on this fic near enough, but i am definitely diggin' it. can't wait for more!

wow, it's about time...way to go carrie for making the first move...so happy..cant wait til the next update...please sooon..

just caught up with all the chapters, very interesting so far and definitely becoming more so now that Carrie is developing feelings in return. nice build up, now I can't wait til she finally gives in and lets Kelly know how she's feeling once she figures it all out for herself.