rate_review Reviews

I love it very sweet and touching

I started off in love with this story then the second chapter just became hard to read. If you want to change something about a story, change the whole thing. The formatting made it hard to read and you jumped around so much I didn't want to keep reading. Still, through all that, I found that I still liked the story. Just not that you hated it. If you hate it so much, why even post it?

The more I read, the more I didn't want the chapter to come to an end. I can't wait to see what happens next ^^

huh... well i hope to see an update for this. i'm all interested now.