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by theProphet

schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was very nice. i like how you went into detail of what kaoru have 2 do every day. he really is optimisic lol. cuz he needs 2 understand there may never b a chance 4 kyo 2 recover from his ordeal.
T___T BUT!!! its up to you wheather kyo stays dis way or not (>_>)~~
so thank you for another chapter! keep it going!!
\m/(^__^)
person leppgirl
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to see an update. :-)

As a fanfiction writer myself, I know it could take chapters for one scene, so don't fret ;-)
just don't take too long. ;-)
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hm, well, this is interesting, but I'm having trouble seeing where you're going with this. It seems to be dragging, and you usually only have one scene per chapter. Plus I'm having a little trouble believing in Kaoru's personality--he seems far too optimistic. Maybe it's just me.

I look forward to your next update. I still want to see what your intentions are.
~K. R. Ukido
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg!! BOYA!!! thank you kyos sister lol! im glad that kaoru can finally have what he wished for! and dang shinya was so cruel T-T.
why cant ppl leave poor kaoru alone hes taking the responsebility not them so they need 2 stop whinning!!! grrrrr!!! kyo needs this but every1s so stuck up and 4got that they have abandon kyo!!
but im glad of the direction the story is going!! i cant wait 4 the next chapter :D!!
your doing a great job! keep up the great work!
person leppgirl
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're very welcome :-)

Ooooo!! I can't wait for Kyo to 'come home', this gave me the initiative to clean my own place for him haha
hurry with more purdy please ;-)
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a new fic~ and here's hoping you're much better at updating than I am. xD;;;
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwwww!!! i love how dedicated kaoru is 2 take care of kyo!!!! i hope da sister dont b a dosh and say no!!!\
im really glad that u updated lol!!! keep up da good work!
sayonra!!
person leppgirl
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm still with you.
Loving every chapter. Just hoping the sister and parents say yes to Kyo living with him.
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well i like dis chapter!! o but its so depressing 2 c kyo like dat T__T da whole time i was thinking dat mayb u will at least let kyo sho sum emotion! dis is killing me plz let kyo sho sumthing!...umm but yay kyo should go home with kaoru it would b best 4 him than dat horrible place *shivers*
Plz update soon and hope ur doing great!!!
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i thought dat was a nice insightful look n2 toshi's mind even tho it was really sad T__T
i wouldnt want 2 leave kyo n such a place alone while he is like dat!!!
plz let kyo cum back 2 us!! ~.~,,
but thanks 4 updating and i hope ur doing well!!!

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