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for Until You Lose Your Breath II

by theProphet

schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG THE END!?!?!?!??!?!??!

I love how cuddly/cute Kyo's and Kao's relationship was. :D
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do so looove a happy ending! Great story, thanks so much for sharing. I'll definitely read part 3 if you decide to move forward with that :)
person leppgirl
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww I loved it. happy everafter.
a part 3?!?!?! oh you devil you!!! can't wait.
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay, Shinya to the rescue!
schedule October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh please let Shinya be running off to find Die and not stop on the way for a double shot latte and some introspective internal monologue!!
person leppgirl
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG thank you for not making them really have sex, this is what I meant!!!!! :))))

oh let Shinya be on his way to Die's place!!!

HURRY with more!!!
schedule October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
We didn't even see much of Die in this latest chapter, but just the bit there was has me depressed. I really hope there's a happy ending, lol.
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
fjdkgdkfhjfkhjfj I love coming here adn seeing so much posted from you!!!!
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OK, there is no way to say this without sounding really lame but... I didn't know that's what those +++++ signs were for (DUH!). It seems pretty obvious now... Anyway, you have the honor of being the first person I plussed. That being said, DAYAM!! I totally would have pegged Toshiya for some good old fashioned hair pulling, hee hee.
person leppgirl
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
DIE don't go with him!!!!

OMG DIE NOOOoooooo!!!!!

with Miyavi?!?!?!

oh please since they can't remember....

poor Shinya. poor Die and poor Toshiya!!!!!!

did I say OMG!!!!!

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