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for Some Assembly Required

by ChibiShiva

person SillySilenia
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well written. With very few exceptions (which I already pointed out off-site and which you already have corrected), good spelling, grammar and punctuation. Just as interesting to read as it was to hear you talk about writing it.

You made me smirk a couple of times, especially at the last scene.

All in all, a lovely fic to read.

~Sil

(I know it's marked as complete/one-shot, but I wouldn't mind reading more of this. -wink-)

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