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May 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really enjoyed this story and the way it combined a lot of elements I've seen in different rape stories. Piling all the abuse on top of abuse and making the attacker sound really disgusting pushed this story beyond just the "sexy rape" idea into something truly disturbing. I did like the way you worded several passages like, "meaty hand around her elegant throat," which was really evocative. "Elegant" was a nice word to use there. Can't help wondering what will happen to poor Christina when Marcus does tire of her...